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*ESSAY: Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I prefer to get up early in the morning, and I go to work at 7:10 AM.
That’s because that I want to avoid the subway during rush hour, which is from 8 AM to 9AM.
And then I arrive at my office about 8AM.
In this case, I have a free time for an hour or so until starting my work.
During my free time, I usually do review my last class or listen to the recording file.
I am used to this kind of life style and I think it is a rewarding thing to me.
In my opinion, no matter if you prefer to get up early or not, it is important how you spend your time.
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I prefer to get up early in the morning, and I go to work at 7:10 AM.>> CORRECT!
That’s because that I want to avoid the subway during rush hour, which is from 8 AM to 9AM.>> That\'s because I want to avoid rush hour at the subway, which is from 8 AM yo 9 AM.
And then I arrive at my office about 8AM.>> And then, I arrive at my office about 8 AM.
In this case, I have a free time for an hour or so until starting my work. >> In this case, I have some free time for an hour or so until I start my work.
During my free time, I usually do review my last class or listen to the recording file. >> During my free time, I usually review my last class or listen to the recording file.
I am used to this kind of life style and I think it is a rewarding thing to me. >> I am used to this kind of life style, and I think it is a rewarding thing to me.
In my opinion, no matter if you prefer to get up early or not, it is important how you spend your time.
>> In my opinion, no matter what time you prefer to get up, whether it\'s early or not, what\'s important is how you spend your time.
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