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We earn our life in America today in peaceful competition with people all across the Earth. Profound and powerful forces are shaking and making our world, and the urgent question of our time is whether we can make change our friend and not our enemy.
This new world has already enriched the lives of millions of Americans who are able to compete and win in it. But when most people are working harder for less, when others cannot work at all, when the cost of health care devastates families and threatens to bankrupt our enterprises, great and small, when the fear of crime robs law abiding citizens of their freedom and when millions of poor children cannot even imagine the lives we are calling them to lead, we have not made change our friend.
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We earn our life in America today in peaceful competition with people all across the Earth.
>> We earn our livelihood in America today in peaceful competition with people all across the Earth.
Profound and powerful forces are shaking and making our world, and the urgent question of our time is whether we can make change our friend and not our enemy.
>> Correct
This new world has already enriched the lives of millions of Americans who are able to compete and win in it.
>> Correct
But when most people are working harder for less, when others cannot work at all, when the cost of health care devastates families and threatens to bankrupt our enterprises, great and small, when the fear of crime robs law abiding citizens of their freedom and when millions of poor children cannot even imagine the lives we are calling them to lead, we have not made change our friend.
>> Correct
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