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Do you prefer hanging out with your friends or with your family? Why?
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To be honest, I prefer hanging out with my old friends and it's so pleasant that I lose track of time whenever I meet my friend.
Whereas I feel great happiness when I spend quality time with my family.
I think happiness with family is much bigger than pleasure with friend as I grow older and I feel like happy when I see happy family.
So I try to balance my life to my family more.
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'Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is a gift of God, which is why we call it the present.'
--Kung Fu Panda, Movie
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Teacher Myra
Do you prefer hanging out with your friends or with your family? Why?
To be honest, I prefer hanging out with my old friends and it\'s so pleasant that I lose track of time whenever I meet my friend.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> To be honest, I prefer hanging out with my old friends, and it\'s so pleasant that I loose track of time whenever I meet my friends.
Whereas I feel great happiness when I spend quality time with my family.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> Whereas, I feel great happiness when I spend quality time with my family.
I think happiness with family is much bigger than pleasure with friend as I grow older and I feel like happy when I see happy family.
>>I think happiness with my family is much bigger than the pleasure I feel with friends as I grow older. Moreover, I feel happy when I see a happy family.
So I try to balance my life to my family more.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>So, I try to balance my family life more.
Howdy howdy? :D
Hope you\'re doing great!
'Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, today is a gift of God, which is why we call it the present.'
--Kung Fu Panda, Movie
As this quotes says, I hope you\'ll be grateful each day and that you\'ll never loose hope amidst the hardships in life (^.^)
Teacher Myra
Do you prefer hanging out with your friends or with your family? Why?
To be honest, I prefer hanging out with my old friends and it\'s so pleasant that I lose track of time whenever I meet my friend.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> To be honest, I prefer hanging out with my old friends, and it\'s so pleasant that I loose track of time whenever I meet my friends.
Whereas I feel great happiness when I spend quality time with my family.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>> Whereas, I feel great happiness when I spend quality time with my family.
I think happiness with family is much bigger than pleasure with friend as I grow older and I feel like happy when I see happy family.
>>I think happiness with my family is much bigger than the pleasure I feel with friends as I grow older. Moreover, I feel happy when I see a happy family.
So I try to balance my life to my family more.
>>CORRECT
BETTER>>So, I try to balance my family life more.
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