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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there [이름]!
Yup, it was a jolly morning. Do you know that there's the almost same word with 'jolly' in French? I just remembered what I learned from the French class. hehe
In French, it is 'joli(e)' that means pretty. I'm not boasting... haha :)
Anyway, take care and bonne journee, mademoiselle. :D
<Essay>
It is what I watched EPL(England Premier League) between Manchester United and West Bromwich. Stephane Sessegnon's shot in the latest game was quiet surprising! How a wonderful long range shot! the ball was stucked in the upper right edge of the nest. I can't easily imagine the more powerful, wonderful shot ever. Haha, it's man's ordinary exciting memory, isn't it?
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon [이름]!
Thanks for sharing this!^^,
And don\'t worry cause I don\'t think that you\'re boasting okay?
Anyway, it was an exciting experience.
However, it is not something that you did.
So I hope you can think about something that you have done.
And maybe you can tell me more about it.
~T. Jessie~
Hi there [이름]!>> Correct!
>> Hahaha! Why are you greeting yourself dear? Wake up!
Yup, it was a jolly morning.
>> Correct!
Do you know that there\'s the almost same word with \'jolly\' in French?
>> Do you know that there\'s a word that sounds almost the same with \'jolly\' in French?
I just remembered what I learned from the French class. hehe
>> Correct!
In French, it is \'joli(e)\' that means pretty.
In French, it is \'joli(e)\' that means pretty.
>> Correct!
I\'m not boasting... haha :)
>> Correct!
Anyway, take care and bonne journee, mademoiselle. :D
>> Correct!
<Essay>
It is what I watched EPL(England Premier League) between Manchester United and West Bromwich.
>> Correct!
Anyway, take care and bonne journee, mademoiselle. :D
>> Correct!
<Essay>
It is what I watched EPL(England Premier League) between Manchester United and West Bromwich.
>> Correct!
Stephane Sessegnon\'s shot in the latest game was quiet surprising!
>> Correct!
How a wonderful long range shot!
>> What a wonderful long range shot!
the ball was stucked in the upper right edge of the nest.
>> The ball was stuck in the upper right edge of the nest.
I can\'t easily imagine the more powerful, wonderful shot ever.
>> I can\'t easily imagine the most powerful, wonderful shot ever.
Haha, it\'s man\'s ordinary exciting memory, isn\'t it?
>> Correct!
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