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2014-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Here is my homework. My Korea name is Tea Young. Before I am born, my father named it. Most Korea people think that Tea Young is man's name.(boy's name) My father wanted his son. (When I was young, I heard my mother this story. ^^) However, my father loved me. When I was 5 years old, I wanted to marry my father. I was young. ^^ Anyway, Tea Young means big bright shine. I like my name. So I named my English name. [이름]'s mean is similar like my Korea name's mean. Dear my teacher. Am I doing well? I am trying to speak English but when I am speaking English, I forgot grammar and vocabulary. Maybe I have an eraser in my head. I am worried that. Am I doing well?? Good night.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for making your homework. Wow! I like the meaning of your name which is big bright sun. It\'s a little bit funny by the way because they thought you were boy. kk. Anyway, atleast your father loved you so much. Regarding your English skill, I can say that you are improving. However, you have to enhance your listening skills as well as your pronunciation. Try to practice tongue twisters and watch English movies everytime, okay. You are able to make good sentences actually but sometimes you are little bit confuse about the subject-verb-agreement. Anyway, there\'s still time for you to learn English. Just focus on your goal. Don\'t give up. I believe in you, [이름]. Good luck! ^^ Take care always! :)   ~~Teacher Kris   Here is my homework. >> CorrectMy Korea name is Tea Young. >> My Korean name is Tea Young.Before I am born, my father named it.>> Before I was born. my father gave me a name. Most Korea people think that Tea Young is man\'s name.(boy\'s name) >> Most Korean people think that Tea Young is a man\'s name.My father wanted his son. >> My father wanted a son.(When I was young, I heard my mother this story. ^^) >> I heard this story when I was young.However, my father loved me. >> Fortunately, my father loved me.When I was 5 years old, I wanted to marry my father. >> When I was 5 years old, I wanted to be with my father.I was young. ^^ >> Correct >> OR: I was a little girl.Anyway, Tea Young means big bright shine. >> By the way, Tea Young means big bright sun.I like my name. >> I liked my name.So I named my English name. >> So, I named my English name.[이름]\'s mean is similar like my Korea name\'s mean.>> The meaning of my name [이름] is the same as my Korean name.Dear my teacher.>> Dearest teacher, Am I doing well? >> CorrectI am trying to speak English but when I am speaking English, I forgot grammar and vocabulary. >> I am trying to speak in English but when I speak, I almost forgot my grammar and vocabluary.Maybe I have an eraser in my head. >> Maybe, I have an eraser in my head.I am worried that. >> I am worried about it.Am I doing well??>> Am I doing well?Good night.  

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