Homework

HI there my dear [이름]!
Yeah!!!Thank you so much for sending in your homework...

Yes, it has been a long time! And I do understand that you have so many things to do and to prepare so you don\'t need to worry about that...

I just wish that you can also have LONGER time to rest...kkkk...

Anyway, I will call you again and take care my dear...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

In current society, the problems about the elderly are getting more serious.

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OR: In our society, the problems regarding elderlies are getting more serious.

However, the corresponding solutions to it are yet not veiled.

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OR: However, the corresponding solutions to them are not yet to reveal.

There are two possible ways to deal with this malady.

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At the societal level, reexamining the retirement ages should be necessary because they are well acquainted with their fields and have the facilities to hand their experiences down on their followers, which can guarantee their potentiality.

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On the other hand, at individual aspect, they should pursue the life-style for their health.

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If they do, the goverment can spare the amount of its fund used to support thier health and instead expend other more productive fields like education or social well-being.
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Observe the proper spelling of the word GOVERNMENT and THEIR.
 Hi, Camille.

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It has been long time since I uploaded my work.^^

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I\'m so sorry for that and hope you understand my situation.

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I will expect today\'s class as a perfect one as always.

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Have a good night and take care of yourself.

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