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학생이 쓴 원문
Do we have to be sad sometimes to be happy at other times?
Yes, we do. I think being sad is also a neccessary feeling.
We have different kinds of feelings inside us.
Because of this, we can feel happy, sad, dissapointed and so on.
If we have just one feeling, we can not feel other feelings well.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! I agree with you. In order for us to understand the real meaning of happiness, we must experience some negative emotions first. Take care and talk to you later!
T. JanE ^^
Do we have to be sad sometimes to be happy at other times?>> Correct Yes, we do.
>> Correct
I think being sad is also a neccessary feeling.>> I think being sad is also necessary.
or >> I think sadness is also a necessary feeling.
We have different kinds of feelings inside us.>> Correct
Because of this, we can feel happy, sad, dissapointed and so on.>> Correct
If we have just one feeling, we can not feel other feelings well. >> Correct
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