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2014-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Lora

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I feel sorry that I didn't practice English hard these days. I was so busy during this week because of my work all day, and I was also busy at home because of househole chores. My wife is fragnant and we are afraid of losing the baby as we did several years ago. We hope for baby to grow up healthily and meet us several months later. I think that one of the happiest jop in the world is a parent. Getting a baby and raising up the baby is the most wonderful experience I have ever done. I have one daughter, five years old, and she is also looking forward to meeting his younger brother or sister. Because we don't know the gender of the baby. Is there any vocaburary meaning younger brother or sister?

강사 첨삭

Hello Brandon ^^
Amazing Friday ^^


I am very pleased that you are sharing your experiences. ^^
I understand how busy you are right now because of your job and your family. And I appreciate it so much that you are allotting some of your time in learning the English language. Keep it up. ^^


On the other hand, I really hope that your wife will be doing well since she is pregnant. I'm glad to know that you are helping her in doing your chores at home, it only shows how responsible you are.

I agree on what you said about the best job in the world is to be a parent. I may not be a parent and I may not have a child as of the moment but my mother also told me that before. You are lucky to have your own family, I know you'll meet your future baby soon.^^


Anyway, about the vocabulary or other term for younger brother or sister, I researched and in the English language it is called sibling or it is also called younger brother or sister and you can also say baby brother or sister.Thank you again for your time in sharing about your life and for learning with me.

I hope to see you more in our classes. Take care Brandon. ^^


-Teacher Lora


I feel sorry that I didn\'t practice English hard these days.
>> I feel sorry that  these days I didn't practice the English language .
I was so busy during this week because of my work all day, and I was also busy at home because of househole chores.
>> I was so busy for this week because of my work and the household chores.
My wife is fragnant and we are afraid of losing the baby as we did several years ago.
>> My wife is pregnant and we are afraid of losing the baby as we did several years ago.
We hope for baby to grow up healthily and meet us several months later.
>> We are hoping for our baby to grow up healthy and meet us soon.
I think that one of the happiest jop in the world is a parent.
>>I think that, one of the happiest job in the world is to a parent.

Getting a baby and raising up the baby is the most wonderful experience I have ever done.
>> Having a baby and raising a child is the most wonderful experience I have ever had.
I have one daughter, five years old, and she is also looking forward to meeting his younger brother or sister.
>> I have a five years old daughter and she is also looking forward to meet her younger brother or sister.
Because we don\'t know the gender of the baby.
>>Correct!
OR:
>> We don't know the gender of the baby yet.
Is there any vocaburary meaning younger brother or sister?
>> Is there another vocabulary or term for younger brother or sister?


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