Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again!
You gave me the topic "Are there some things or times that you will never forget? Share it in writing."
Yes, I have memories that I want never to forget.
I will tell you one of them.
last January ( or do I say "in January last'?) my family and I went to Jeju Island. You know the Jeju island?
You might already know. It is most famous island in Korea.
Well, since I was a young child, I heard so many times from so many people that the islands of the Philippines like Cebu and Boracay are so much beautiful.
The Jeju island is as beautiful as them in the Philippines.
Oh, suddenly I remember that I planed first that we go to Boracay.
But big typhoon struck the Philippines (I'm really sorry for that.) and I had to cancle air tickets that I bought for my family.
Anyway, the reason that I will never forget the travel is that the It was first that I planned and booked all of a travel by myself for my family.
During the travel, we ate many delicious food and went many nice places.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
How are you? I hope that you will visit my country someday. Hihihi.
I want to recommend Palawan, because it is really a wonderful place.
It\'s like a paradise. I\'ve never been there. Hahahaha. But I heard a lot of stories from my cousins.
Try to search it on the internet.
Have a fun day.
Teacher Nina
Hello again!
>> correct
You gave me the topic \"Are there some things or times that you will never forget? Share it in writing.\"
You gave me the topic \"Are there some things or times that you will never forget? Share it in writing.\"
>> correct
Yes, I have memories that I want never to forget.
Yes, I have memories that I want never to forget.
>> Yes, I have memories that I will never forget.
>> OR: Yes, I have memories that I won\'t ever forget.
I will tell you one of them.
I will tell you one of them.
>> correct
>> OR: I will share one of those memories.
last January ( or do I say \"in January last\'?) my family and I went to Jeju Island.
last January ( or do I say \"in January last\'?) my family and I went to Jeju Island.
>> Last January, my family and I went to Jeju Island.
You know the Jeju island?
>> Do you know Jeju Island?
You might already know.
You might already know.
>> You might already know it.
It is most famous island in Korea.
>> It is the most famous island in Korea.
Well, since I was a young child, I heard so many times from so many people that the islands of the Philippines like Cebu and Boracay are so much beautiful.
Well, since I was a young child, I heard so many times from so many people that the islands of the Philippines like Cebu and Boracay are so much beautiful.
>> Well, since I was young, I heard a lot of times from so many people that the islands of the Philippines like Cebu and Boracay are so much beautiful.
>> OR: Since I was a child, I heard from a lot of people that the places in the Philippines such as Cebu and Boracay are really beautiful.
The Jeju island is as beautiful as them in the Philippines.
>> Jeju Island is as beautiful as the ones in the Philippines.
Oh, suddenly I remember that I planed first that we go to Boracay.
Oh, suddenly I remember that I planed first that we go to Boracay.
>> Oh, I suddenly I remember that my family and I planned to go to Boracay.
>> OR: Oh, I suddenly remembered that I once planned to go to Boracay with my family.
But big typhoon struck the Philippines (I\'m really sorry for that.) and I had to cancle air tickets that I bought for my family.
But big typhoon struck the Philippines (I\'m really sorry for that.) and I had to cancle air tickets that I bought for my family.
>> But a big typhoon struck the Philippines, I\'m sorry about that. And I had to cancel the tickets that I bought for my family.
>> OR: But a strong typhoon hit the Philippines, I\'m sorry about that. So, I had to cancel the tickets that I bought for my family.
Anyway, the reason that I will never forget the travel is that the It was first that I planned and booked all of a travel by myself for my family.
Anyway, the reason that I will never forget the travel is that the It was first that I planned and booked all of a travel by myself for my family.
>> Anyway, the reason that I won\'t forget that travel is that, it was the first trip that I planned and booked by myself for my family.
>> OR: Anyway, the reason that I will never forget that travel is because it was the first trip that I planned and booked by myself for my family.
During the travel, we ate many delicious food and went many nice places.
During the travel, we ate many delicious food and went many nice places.
>> Did you mean: During the travel, we ate many delicious food and went to a lot of nice places.
>> OR: I think when we will be able to go to the Philippines, we will eat many delicious food and visit a lot of nice places.
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