Homework :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Good afternoon teacher Nina!
I'm back to do homeworks.
I read your corrections and I'm impressed that you gave me the corrections even if it's weekend.
Do you have a diner?
I ate a hamburger and French fries with a coke for a late lunch. Then I ate ice cream for dessert.
Usually I try to cut down times that I eat fast-food.
But I did my best this week. So today, I ate what I want as much as I want :)
Now I feel as if I can think anything positive!
You ask me "What are some gestures that you didn't learn until you were a teenager or a young adult?"
I remember something.
When I was a high school student, I learned 'finger crossed' in English class.
At that time, I learned various hand gestures of various contries.
Now I remember just the finger crossed.
It means "good luck" by a teacher.
And few years later from the time that I was a high school student, I watched in American drama that a actor uesd finger crossed.
I was surprised and nice to see that the gesture is really used.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Wow! I love hamburger and fries. Hihihi.
Thanks for making my day again. I hope that you are learning a lot from our lessons.
I encourage you to always remember the corrections and try not commit those lapses again.
I know you can do it. Just be patient. I know learning English is a bit difficult and tricky.
But I know that you can do it. Talk to you very soon.
Teacher Nina
Teacher Nina
>> correct
I\'m back to do homeworks.
I\'m back to do homeworks.
>> I\'m back to do my homework.
I read your corrections and I\'m impressed that you gave me the corrections even if it\'s weekend.
I read your corrections and I\'m impressed that you gave me the corrections even if it\'s weekend.
>> correct
>> OR: I read your corrections and I\'m impressed that you gave me those even if it\'s weekend.
Do you have a diner?
Do you have a diner?
>> Did you eat dinner?
I ate a hamburger and French fries with a coke for a late lunch.
I ate a hamburger and French fries with a coke for a late lunch.
>> I ate hamburger and french fries with coke for late lunch.
Then I ate ice cream for dessert.
>> correct
Usually I try to cut down times that I eat fast-food.
>> Usually, I try to cut down the times I eat in a fast food chain.
But I did my best this week.
But I did my best this week.
>> correct
So today, I ate what I want as much as I want :)
>> So today, I ate what I want as much as I can.
>> OR: So today, I ate the food that I really want.
Now I feel as if I can think anything positive!
Now I feel as if I can think anything positive!
>> Now, I feel that I can think positive about anything.
You ask me \"What are some gestures that you didn\'t learn until you were a teenager or a young adult?\"
I remember something.
You ask me \"What are some gestures that you didn\'t learn until you were a teenager or a young adult?\"
I remember something.
>> I remembered something.
When I was a high school student, I learned \'finger crossed\' in English class.
When I was a high school student, I learned \'finger crossed\' in English class.
>> correct
At that time, I learned various hand gestures of various contries.
>> correct (spelling check: countries ^^)
>> OR: At that time, I learned various hand gestures of different countries.
Now I remember just the finger crossed.
>> Now, I just remember the term \"finger crossed.
It means \"good luck\" by a teacher.
It means \"good luck\" by a teacher.
>> It means \"good luck\" from a teacher.
And few years later from the time that I was a high school student, I watched in American drama that a actor uesd finger crossed.
And few years later from the time that I was a high school student, I watched in American drama that a actor uesd finger crossed.
>> And few years later from the time that I was a high school student, I watched an American drama that an actor used the term\"finger crossed\".
I was surprised and nice to see that the gesture is really used.
I was surprised and nice to see that the gesture is really used.
>> correct
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