Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again !
You know what? I like to write a composition more and more.
I always expect your correction and short writing to me.
Homeworks are sometimes difficult to me especially topics of compositions.
Because the topics are usually things that I never have thought or it is hard to me to say something about.
But as time goes by, and I wrote a composition more and more, I like to write to a composition!
And thank you for your help :)
Below is a my homework!
1. She often has difficulty understanding him.
2. You have to usually pay in advance.
3. She is always polite on the phone.
4. She very rarely was at work last year.
5. Unfortunately, it has been always expensive to fly to Australia.
6. You can never find him when you need him.
7. We never have had problems with him.
8. Have you ever been to London?
9. We occasionally travel to other countries.
10. How often do you have to renew a passport?
I was really hard to do this homework.
Those were very confusing :(
강사 첨삭
Hi there again [이름]!
Thanks for always accepting corrections and suggestions in a positive way.
I hope that you are having a wonderful time learning English.
You did a very nice job! Keep it up!
Always be mindful of your verb tenses and adverbs of time/ frequency.
Please go over the corrections below.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask me in class.
Teacher Nina
Hello again !
>> Correct
You know what?
>> Correct
I like to write a composition more and more.
>> I like to write more compositions.
I always expect your correction and short writing to me.
I always expect your correction and short writing to me.
>> I always expect your correction and short message for me.
Homeworks are sometimes difficult to me especially topics of compositions.
Homeworks are sometimes difficult to me especially topics of compositions.
>> My homework are sometimes difficult for me especially the essay ones.
Because the topics are usually things that I never have thought or it is hard to me to say something about.
Because the topics are usually things that I never have thought or it is hard to me to say something about.
>> Because the topics are usually the things that I never thought about or it is hard for me to say something about it.
But as time goes by, and I wrote a composition more and more, I like to write to a composition!
But as time goes by, and I wrote a composition more and more, I like to write to a composition!
>> But as time goes by and I was writing more compositions, I began to like doing essays.
>> OR: But as time goes by and I was writing more compositions, I began to like it.
And thank you for your help :)
And thank you for your help :)
>> Correct
Below is a my homework!
>> Below is my homework.
Below is a my homework!
>> Below is my homework.
>> OR: My homework is as follows.
1. She often has difficulty understanding him.
>> Correct
2. You have to usually pay in advance.
>> You usually have to pay in advance.
3. She is always polite on the phone.
>> Correct
4. She very rarely was at work last year.
>> She was very rarely at work last year.
5. Unfortunately, it has been always expensive to fly to Australia.
>> Unfortunately, it has always been expensive to fly to Australia.
6. You can never find him when you need him.
>> Correct
7. We never have had problems with him.
>> We have never had problems with him.
8. Have you ever been to London?
>> Correct
9. We occasionally travel to other countries.
>> Correct
10. How often do you have to renew a passport?
>> Correct
I was really hard to do this homework.
>> I really had a hard time doing this homework.
>> OR: I really had difficulty answering my homework.
Those were very confusing :(
Those were very confusing :(
>> It was very confusing.
>> OR: The questions were very confusing.
>> OR: The questions were very confusing.
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