homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^.^
Happy Monday! ^^
Very well said! ^^
You made things really direct to the point.
Very good! ^^
If I grade your composition, it will be 7 out of 10.
This is a good score for a written work.
By the way, please check the corrections and suggestions below! ^^
Anyway, see you very soon! ^^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
I am now working at a small company.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I am now working for a small company.
I have never worked at a large company, so it is hard to say which I prefer.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I have never worked for a large company, so it is hard to say which I prefer.
However I am satisfied with my current company life, and I don’t want to move to another company, even if that is a larger one.
>> However, I am satisfied with my current company life, and I don\'t want to move to another workplace, even if that is a larger one. (How do you type your punctuation marks for shorten words like don\'t. It appears different on my page. Anyway, you need to avoid redundancy or repetition of words.)
I think all people have their primary reason when they choose the company.
>> I think all people have their primary reasons when they choose the company where they work. (We don\'t have the same reasons, so the word reason should be in plural form.)
I guess the most important thing is how you are satisfied with your current job.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I guess the most important reason is your satisfaction in your current job.
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