Homework
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Would my life be better or worse if I knew the day, time, and place that I was going to die?
There are some good and bad point at the same time.
First, My life would be better if I knew the day, time, and place that
I was going to die.
I could prepare the things around me and have some time for myself.
So I would have a trip with my precious people.
Second, My life would be worse if I knew the day, time, and place that
I was going to die because it would be fear for me. I want to deny and avoid the situation that I would die or I would give up on my life I would think that I would die anyway. This is the bad point...
Life is fuuny because we can not know the future even near future..
I believe that we can make our lives by ourselves.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition today! Indeed, life is full of surprises. One of these is not knowing when and where our life ends. That makes our life even more meaningful because we value things even more. Take care and akways live life to the fullest!
T. JanE ^^
Would my life be better or worse if I knew the day, time, and place that I was going to die?>> Correct There are some good and bad point at the same time.>> There are both good and bad points. First, My life would be better if I knew the day, time, and place that I was going to die.>> Correct I could prepare the things around me and have some time for myself.>> Correct So I would have a trip with my precious people. >> So I would have a trip with precious people. Second, My life would be worse if I knew the day, time, and place that I was going to die because it would be fear for me.
>> In contrast, my life would be worse if I knew the day, time, and place that I was going to die because I would fear it. I want to deny and avoid the situation that I would die or I would give up on my life I would think that I would die anyway.
>> I want to deny and avoid the situation that I would die, or I would give up my life thinking that I would die anyway. This is the bad point...>> Correct Life is fuuny because we can not know the future even near future..>> Life is fun because we don\'t know what the future holds. I believe that we can make our lives by ourselves.
>> Correct
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