HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Compose sentences using the words below for further practice.
1. structure
2. development
3. stabilize
4. disseminate
5. modulate
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As per recent news, pothold is being increased in Korea and people in the city are threatened by pothole suddenly formed.
I think it's all because the development thoughtless has made the structure of ground weak, so ground needs to be stabilized under the long plan.
Moreoever I think cityhall has to disseminate the information about pothole more to let citizen recognize the risk of pothole.
Lastly cityhall has to also modulate the level of lakes in the city periodically to expect a pothole.
강사 첨삭
HAPPY, HAPPY
M O N D A Y Mr. [이름]!! (\")(^O^)
Oh my, hello again. :))
I always feel thrilled with Mondays because I can catch up with you again. :))
Hope to hear your wonderful stories later my dear!
Thank you too for doing your homework! Great job! :D
~~~oo~~~Teacher Myra ~~~oo~~~
Compose sentences using the words below for further practice.
1. structure
2. development
3. stabilize
4. disseminate
5. modulate
As per recent news, pothold is being increased in Korea and people in the city are threatened by pothole suddenly formed.
>>As per recent news, pothole is increasing in Korea and people in the city are threatened by the pothole which was suddenly formed.
I think it\'s all because the development thoughtless has made the structure of ground weak, so ground needs to be stabilized under the long plan.
>>I think it\'s all because of the developments that has made the structure of the ground weak, so the ground needs to be stabilized under a long plan.
Moreoever I think cityhall has to disseminate the information about pothole more to let citizen recognize the risk of pothole.
>>Moreoever I think our city hall has to disseminate the information about potholes more to let the citizens recognize the risk of potholes.
Lastly cityhall has to also modulate the level of lakes in the city periodically to expect a pothole.
>>Lastly, the city hall also has modulate the level of lakes in the city periodically to expect a pothole.
M O N D A Y Mr. [이름]!! (\")(^O^)
Oh my, hello again. :))
I always feel thrilled with Mondays because I can catch up with you again. :))
Hope to hear your wonderful stories later my dear!
Thank you too for doing your homework! Great job! :D
~~~oo~~~Teacher Myra ~~~oo~~~
Compose sentences using the words below for further practice.
1. structure
2. development
3. stabilize
4. disseminate
5. modulate
As per recent news, pothold is being increased in Korea and people in the city are threatened by pothole suddenly formed.
>>As per recent news, pothole is increasing in Korea and people in the city are threatened by the pothole which was suddenly formed.
I think it\'s all because the development thoughtless has made the structure of ground weak, so ground needs to be stabilized under the long plan.
>>I think it\'s all because of the developments that has made the structure of the ground weak, so the ground needs to be stabilized under a long plan.
Moreoever I think cityhall has to disseminate the information about pothole more to let citizen recognize the risk of pothole.
>>Moreoever I think our city hall has to disseminate the information about potholes more to let the citizens recognize the risk of potholes.
Lastly cityhall has to also modulate the level of lakes in the city periodically to expect a pothole.
>>Lastly, the city hall also has modulate the level of lakes in the city periodically to expect a pothole.
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