homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I disagree that.
Becuase history will be repet.
We can get the experience from the past ans using the presnt for the future.
Someone said, 'The people who forgot the past, will be a dying race.'
Histoy is important!!!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Thank you for answering Monday\'s homework. ^^ I agree with you that history is important. ^^ Your composition presented your opinion well but the sentences were written in the best way. Compare and contrast between the sentences to understand more how to write better. ^^
See you in class!^^
All good things,
==Teacher Charlie==
I disagree that.Becuase history will be repet.
>> I disagree that learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present because history repeats itself.We can get the experience from the past ans using the presnt for the future.
>> We can learn from the experiences of the past and the experiences now for the future.Someone said, \'The people who forgot the past, will be a dying race.\'
>> Someone once said; \"The people who forget about the past will be a dying race.\"Histoy is important!!!
>> History, therefore, is important.
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