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I agree. Here is the some problen appearmant. That is reason for the progress. If we stop the progress, we can't see the future. That's mean, lf we have a progress similar to revolution, we colud compelete the problem.

Good day to you [이름]! ^^ Good job in expressing your opinion about progress being a good thing. ^^ Remember, that your first sentence should always present the topic being discussed (sentence 1) and if you are comparing one thing to another, don\'t forget to mention how they are similar (sentence 4). The rest of the corrections (sentence 2 and 3) are rephrasing and grammar corrections for comprehensibility and incisiveness. Keep improving. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==   I agree. >> I agree that progress is always good.Here is the some problen appearmant. That is reason for the progress.>> The reason of progress is to solve an identified problem.If we stop the progress, we can\'t see the future. >> If we stop progressing, we won\'t be able to see or experience the future.That\'s mean, lf we have a progress similar to revolution, we colud compelete the problem. >> What I mean is that if we liken progress to evolution, we could find a solution to present problems by way of adaptation.