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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello again!
Hehe, it's the last, isn't it?
There's so many tasks to think deeply and finish. Maybe it's because of the festival, the first exam's end, and so on. But what I didn't is all my fault, anyway... :'(
But, let me see you tommrow again!
Take care then!
<Esaay>
I think the most important thing that we have to teach them is to plant the idea that there's always hope and dream which you can chase down. Hopes and dream, it's really wonderful words, isn't it? So besides of them, we also need to keep our mind open to be able to pursue our another dream and hope for the better future!
강사 첨삭
Good morning!
Thanks for sharing this.
Anyway, have you thought of how you can teach children those?
Well, it\'s a very good idea. Like they\'ve said, children are the hope of the future.
So it really is important. ^^
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello again!
>> Correct!
Hehe, it\'s the last, isn\'t it?
>> Correct!
There\'s so many tasks to think deeply and finish.
>> There\'s so many tasks to think about deeply and to finish.
Maybe it\'s because of the festival, the first exam\'s end, and so on.
>> Correct!
But what I didn\'t is all my fault, anyway... :\'(
>> But what I did is all my fault, anyway... :\'(
But, let me see you tommrow again!
>> But, let me see you tomorrow again!
OR>> But, let me see you again tomorrow!
Take care then!
>> Correct!
<Esaay>
I think the most important thing that we have to teach them is to plant the idea that there\'s always hope and dream which you can chase down.
>> Correct!
Hopes and dream, it\'s really wonderful words, isn\'t it?
>> Hopes and dream, they\'re really wonderful words, aren\'t they?
So besides of them, we also need to keep our mind open to be able to pursue our another dream and hope for the better future!
>> So beside that, we also need to keep our minds open to be able to pursue our dreams and hope for the better future!
Thanks for sharing this.
Anyway, have you thought of how you can teach children those?
Well, it\'s a very good idea. Like they\'ve said, children are the hope of the future.
So it really is important. ^^
Enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello again!
>> Correct!
Hehe, it\'s the last, isn\'t it?
>> Correct!
There\'s so many tasks to think deeply and finish.
>> There\'s so many tasks to think about deeply and to finish.
Maybe it\'s because of the festival, the first exam\'s end, and so on.
>> Correct!
But what I didn\'t is all my fault, anyway... :\'(
>> But what I did is all my fault, anyway... :\'(
But, let me see you tommrow again!
>> But, let me see you tomorrow again!
OR>> But, let me see you again tomorrow!
Take care then!
>> Correct!
<Esaay>
I think the most important thing that we have to teach them is to plant the idea that there\'s always hope and dream which you can chase down.
>> Correct!
Hopes and dream, it\'s really wonderful words, isn\'t it?
>> Hopes and dream, they\'re really wonderful words, aren\'t they?
So besides of them, we also need to keep our mind open to be able to pursue our another dream and hope for the better future!
>> So beside that, we also need to keep our minds open to be able to pursue our dreams and hope for the better future!
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