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Hi my teacher Paula! Good morning. Maybe you can see my composition this afternoon. I read your modification, and I just want to let you know how I typed the punctuation marks for shorten words. When I make the composition, I usually write them on the Microsoft Word, and then I copy them to the web page. Today I tested the punctuation marks, and it definitely appeared different on my web page. Sorry for confusing you, but I hope you understand it. Thanks very much for your kind explanation. See you. ^^ *ESSAY Yes, I agree with this opinion. I am working now, and the most important reason is for making money to live. As you know, it is very hard for us to look for an easy and funny work. Whenever we work every day, we will always be faced with a lot of troubles and problems. However, we still keep working, and we don't quit our job easily. Even we are afraid of being laid off. That's because we already know that we have to take the responsibility for our life by ourselves, and moreover, we can't live off our parents anymore. Now, I envy other countries which have a good social security such as Switzerland or Denmark. I wish our country had a good social security like them. If that was to become a reality, we could lighten our economic burden.

Hi my beautiful Student [이름]! ^.^ Happy Tuesday! ^^   First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for clarifying the issue about punctuation marks. Now, it is totally clear.   By the way, it is a straight forward composition. Very good! ^^ I like the way you become frank in your writing. Of course, we really work for money for survival. Money is one of our basic needs. If you don\'t comply with it, our living will not be balanced. About social security, it is indeed an important issue needs to be addressed.   Anyway, don\'t forget to review your composition together the corrections and suggestions for more improvement. See you! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi my teacher Paula! >> Hi my Teacher Paula! (When a noun is before a name of a person, the first letter of that noun should be in uppercase form.) Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! Maybe you can see my composition this afternoon.>> Maybe, you can see my composition this afternoon. (When \"maybe\" is in the beginning of a sentence, there should be a comma after it.) >> OR: You might see my composition this afternoon. I read your modification, and I just want to let you know how I typed the punctuation marks for shorten words. >> CORRECT! When I make the composition, I usually write them on the Microsoft Word, and then I copy them to the web page. >> When I make compositions, I usually write them on the Microsoft Word, and then I copy them to the web page. (When you are giving a general though, don\'t use \"the\" and make the important nouns in plural.) Today I tested the punctuation marks, and it definitely appeared different on my web page. >> Today, I tested the punctuation marks, and it definitely appeared different on my web page. (Put a comma after \"today\" since it is used in the beginning of your sentence.) Sorry for confusing you, but I hope you understand it. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Sorry to confuse you, but I hope you understand it. >> OR: Sorry to confuse you, but I hope you understand me. Thanks very much for your kind explanation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Thank you very much for your kind explanation! See you. ^^ >> CORRECT! >> OR: See you! *ESSAY Yes, I agree with this opinion. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Yes, I agree with the given statement. I am working now, and the most important reason is for making money to live. >>  CORRECT! As you know, it is very hard for us to look for an easy and funny work.>> CORRECT! >> OR: As you know, it is very hard for us to look for an easy and enjoyable work. Whenever we work every day, we will always be faced with a lot of troubles and problems.>> Whenever we work every day, we are always faced with a lot of troubles and problems. (Because of \"every day\", you can\'t use will in your sentence.)  However, we still keep working, and we don\'t quit our job easily. >> However, we still keep working, and we don\'t quit out jobs easily. (\"Our job\" means one kind of job of people. \"Our jobs\" means people have different types of jobs.) Even we are afraid of being laid off. >> CORRECT! That\'s because we already know that we have to take the responsibility for our life by ourselves, and moreover, we can\'t live off our parents anymore. >> That\'s because we already know that we have to take the responsibility for our lives by ourselves, and we can\'t live off our parents anymore. (\"Life\" should be lives. \"And moreover\" is redundant.) >> OR: That\'s because we already know that we have to take the responsibility for our lives by ourselves. Moreover, we can\'t live off our parents anymore. Now, I envy other countries which have a good social security such as Switzerland or Denmark. >> CORRECT! I wish our country had a good social security like them. >> CORRECT! If that was to become a reality, we could lighten our economic burden. >> CORRECT!