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2014-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. The Evil Prince was very proud. 2. He travelled to many different towns. 3. He stole the treasures of other lands. 4. The people of his kingdom hated him for his accomplishments. 5. He believed the people when they said that he was great.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition! I hope your day is goin smoothly. Take care and talk to you later! T. JanE ^^1. The Evil Prince was very proud.>> Correct 2. He travelled to many different towns.>> Correct 3. He stole the treasures of other lands.>> Correct 4. The people of his kingdom hated him for his accomplishments.>> The people of his kingdom hailed him for his accomplishments. 5. He believed the people when they said that he was great. >> Correct

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