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2014-10-28 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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The implementation of competitive sports in shools can infuse students with some virtues necessary in their future. It helps them realize what a real value of the competition means. There is an old saying which is "one who wins deserves his victory." Moreover, students can have various experiences to know the advantages when cooperating with one another. During the path in which they defeat each other, they can learn cooperation is the key factor when achieving what they want, and, more specifically, can afford a type of field for showing others what they have gotten.

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The implementation of competitive sports in shools can infuse students with some virtues necessary in their future.

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Just observe the proper spelling of the word SCHOOLS.

It helps them realize what a real value of the competition means.

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There is an old saying which is \"one who wins deserves his victory.\"

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Moreover, students can have various experiences to know the advantages when cooperating with one another.

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During the path in which they defeat each other, they can learn cooperation is the key factor when achieving what they want, and, more specifically, can afford a type of field for showing others what they have gotten.

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