Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Reina.
Thank you so much for cheering me up. :)
I sometimes feel bad about myself when I have a difficulty in making sentences.
I will keep on doing my best and practice speaking english as much as I can in a daily life.
Here is my homework, so please check this out.
- Homework -
Halloween is actually not a popular holiday in our country.
It is rather a normal working day for me, so I celebrate Halloween sharing some candies and chocolates with my colleagues.
But there are some places which have some special events in Halloween such as amusement parks, restaurants and bars.
Many young children love to go to amusement parks because they held a halloween party with special events including ghost parades.
And some people celebrate Halloween with their friends wearing weird and funny costumes.
강사 첨삭
Hello dear [이름]!
Thank you for sharing about Halloween!^^ It\'s always a pleasure to make you feel comfortable in our class.
I like the fact that you are a very talkative student and always talks with sense!kkk
You\'re a brilliant person with lots of opinion to anything so you have to feel good about yourself.
I just wonder how you look like in a Halloween costume.kkk
I\'ll talk to you later!~
Teacher Reina *,*
Hello, Reina.
Thank you so much for cheering me up. :)
>>> correct!^^
I sometimes feel bad about myself when I have a difficulty in making sentences.
>>> correct!^^
I will keep on doing my best and practice speaking english as much as I can in a daily life.
>>> I will keep on doing my best and practice speaking English as much as I can everyday of my life.
Here is my homework, so please check this out.
>>> correct!^^
- Homework -
Halloween is actually not a popular holiday in our country.
>>> correct!^^
It is rather a normal working day for me, so I celebrate Halloween sharing some candies and chocolates with my colleagues.
>>> correct!^^
But there are some places which have some special events in Halloween such as amusement parks, restaurants and bars.
>>> correct!^^
Many young children love to go to amusement parks because they held a halloween party with special events including ghost parades.
>>> Many young children love to go to an amusement parks because they held a Halloween party with special events including ghost parades.
And some people celebrate Halloween with their friends wearing weird and funny costumes.
>>> correct!^^
Thank you for sharing about Halloween!^^ It\'s always a pleasure to make you feel comfortable in our class.
I like the fact that you are a very talkative student and always talks with sense!kkk
You\'re a brilliant person with lots of opinion to anything so you have to feel good about yourself.
I just wonder how you look like in a Halloween costume.kkk
I\'ll talk to you later!~
Teacher Reina *,*
Hello, Reina.
Thank you so much for cheering me up. :)
>>> correct!^^
I sometimes feel bad about myself when I have a difficulty in making sentences.
>>> correct!^^
I will keep on doing my best and practice speaking english as much as I can in a daily life.
>>> I will keep on doing my best and practice speaking English as much as I can everyday of my life.
Here is my homework, so please check this out.
>>> correct!^^
- Homework -
Halloween is actually not a popular holiday in our country.
>>> correct!^^
It is rather a normal working day for me, so I celebrate Halloween sharing some candies and chocolates with my colleagues.
>>> correct!^^
But there are some places which have some special events in Halloween such as amusement parks, restaurants and bars.
>>> correct!^^
Many young children love to go to amusement parks because they held a halloween party with special events including ghost parades.
>>> Many young children love to go to an amusement parks because they held a Halloween party with special events including ghost parades.
And some people celebrate Halloween with their friends wearing weird and funny costumes.
>>> correct!^^
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