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The problem of current education can be described as the phonomenon that it only centers on the level of achievenment.

>>The problem of current education can be described as the phenomenon that only centers on the level of the students\' achievement.

Now, this trend affects our students iniquitouly, for example, infusing with them the fact that there is no option other than being more competitive in their life.

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Potentially, it has many side effects on the education such as encouraging rote-learning and selectional teaching which just emphasizes the elements considered important on tests.

>>Potentially, it has many disadvantages on the education such as encouraging rote-learning and selectional teaching that emphasize the elements which are considered important in tests.

To solve these maladies, we, as a teacher, should engross into them the lesson that learning is not means but ends.

>>To solve these maladies, we, as teachers, should engross into them the lesson that learning is means but ends.

One notable philosopher says \"The role of learning gives us the delight and pleasure of discovering something.\"

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Apart from it, no one can defeat those who enjoy, which illutstrates the importance of the value of learning to satisfy one\'s intellectual needs.

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