homework

Dear [Name] Paula! Good morning. As I know, Halloween is coming soon. How is your costume for Halloween going? I hope you prepare it well and enjoy the party. See you! ^^ *Essay: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. I think it is very difficult issue to choose, but if someone asks me to choose, I will choose face-to-face communication. When I work, I usually communicate by email or telephone calls. Even though these are very convenient, I don’t think it will make me be close with our customers. Sometimes, I am faced with some troubles at my work, and I have to call my customers. In this case, I think that if I met them face to face, I could solve troubles easier. From now on, to make a good relationship, I should try to meet them as often as I can.

My Dearest Student [이름]! ^.^   A blissful Wednesday to you! ^^ Ohhh ~~~ ^^ How did you know about our Halloween activity? Hahaha! ^^ That\'s surprising.   Anyhow, frankly speaking, I don\'t know what costume I will wear for the said event. I was too excited last week. However, the feeling of excitement decreased. OMG ~~~ I\'m dead. You need to wish me luck. ^^   By the way, I was a little bit shocked but totally amazed of your composition. You really have a good heart. You don\'t only consider convenience but also good relationship with other people. I totally agree with your point that things can be solved easier through face-to-face communication. Today, I rate your composition as 8 over 10. Good job! ^^   Anyway, see you very soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear [Name] Paula!>> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! As I know, Halloween is coming soon. >> CORRECT! How is your costume for Halloween going? >> CORRECT! I hope you prepare it well and enjoy the party. >> CORRECT! See you! ^^>> CORRECT! *Essay: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. I think it is very difficult issue to choose, but if someone asks me to choose, I will choose face-to-face communication. >> I think it is a very difficult issue to decide, but if someone asks me to choose the best type of communication for me, I will have face-to-face communication. (Avoid redundancy. Find other words for \"choose\". In addition, use \"a\" since the word issue is singular.) When I work, I usually communicate by email or telephone calls. >> CORRECT! Even though these are very convenient, I don’t think it will make me be close with our customers.>> Even though these are very convenient, I don\'t think they will make me be close with our customers. (The punctiation mark in \"don\'t\" is wrongly typed. \"It should be \"they\" because of \"these\" in the first clause.)  Sometimes, I am faced with some troubles at my work, and I have to call my customers. >> CORRECT! In this case, I think that if I met them face to face, I could solve troubles easier. >> In this case, I think that if I met them face-to-face, I could solve troubles easier. (You forgot to put dashes for \"face-to-face\".) >> OR: In this case, I think if I met them face-to-face, I could solve my troubles with them easier. From now on, to make a good relationship, I should try to meet them as often as I can. >> CORRECT!