Homework.
학생이 쓴 원문
My husband's birthday.
I made some food and bought a cake.
But my first daughter didn't buy her father's present.
Because she spent all her money.
I bought one more present.
I gave her it.
I said "You can give him it. It is secret with you"
My daughter said "Thanks Mom."
Hi Kris.
Speaking English is very difficult for me.
Also my idea can't speak English. It is very difficult too.
Good night.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
How are you? You know what, I know how you feel.
I know that you are struggling in learning English. That is normal. As beginner,
you have to go under a lot pressure and stress. But, you have to persevere
in order for you to achieve your goals. [이름], I believe in you. I know
you can do it. Just believe in yourself that you can do it. Like I said, let us
do this little by little, okay. Good luck, [이름]! ^^
Take care always! ^^
See you. :)
~~Teacher Kris
My husband\'s birthday.I made some food and bought a cake.
>> In my husband\'s party, I made some food and I bought a cake.
But my first daughter didn\'t buy her father\'s present. Because she spent all her money.
>> But, my first daughter didn\'t buy any presents for her father because she spent all her money.
I bought one more present.
>> Correct
I gave her it.
>> I gave her the present.
I said \"You can give him it. It is secret with you\"
>> I said, \"You give this to your father. This is our secret.\"
My daughter said \"Thanks Mom.\"
>> My daughter said, \"Thanks mom.\"
>> OR: My daughter thanked me.
Hi Kris.
Speaking English is very difficult for me.
>> Correct
Also my idea can\'t speak English. It is very difficult too.
>> Also, I can hardly express myself through English. It is really difficult.
Good night.
How are you? You know what, I know how you feel.
I know that you are struggling in learning English. That is normal. As beginner,
you have to go under a lot pressure and stress. But, you have to persevere
in order for you to achieve your goals. [이름], I believe in you. I know
you can do it. Just believe in yourself that you can do it. Like I said, let us
do this little by little, okay. Good luck, [이름]! ^^
Take care always! ^^
See you. :)
~~Teacher Kris
My husband\'s birthday.I made some food and bought a cake.
>> In my husband\'s party, I made some food and I bought a cake.
But my first daughter didn\'t buy her father\'s present. Because she spent all her money.
>> But, my first daughter didn\'t buy any presents for her father because she spent all her money.
I bought one more present.
>> Correct
I gave her it.
>> I gave her the present.
I said \"You can give him it. It is secret with you\"
>> I said, \"You give this to your father. This is our secret.\"
My daughter said \"Thanks Mom.\"
>> My daughter said, \"Thanks mom.\"
>> OR: My daughter thanked me.
Hi Kris.
Speaking English is very difficult for me.
>> Correct
Also my idea can\'t speak English. It is very difficult too.
>> Also, I can hardly express myself through English. It is really difficult.
Good night.
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