Homework

Hi there my dear [이름], happy Thursday!

Thank you so much for sending this in.

Great job on this. About the form of the letter, well, you can write it in either Block or Indented form.

When you use the block form to write a letter, all the information is typed flush left, with one-inch margins all around. First provide your own address, then skip a line and provide the date, then skip one more line and provide the inside address of the party to whom the letter is addressed. If you are using letterhead that already provides your address, do not retype that information; just begin with the date. For formal letters, avoid abbreviations where possible.

Skip another line before the salutation, which should be followed by a colon. Then write the body of your letter as illustrated here, with no indentation at the beginnings of paragraphs. Skip lines between paragraphs.

After writing the body of the letter, type the closing, followed by a comma, leave 3 blank lines, then type your name and title (if applicable), all flush left. Sign the letter in the blank space above your typed name.

 If you are using the indented form, place your address at the top, with the left edge of the address aligned with the center of the page. Skip a line and type the date so that it lines up underneath your address.  Type the inside address and salutation flush left; the salutation should be followed by a colon. For formal letters, avoid abbreviations. Indent the first line of each paragraph one-half inch. Skip lines between paragraphs.
Instead of placing the closing and signature lines flush left, type them in the center, even with the address and date above, as illustrated here.

 I hope this could help you my dear [이름]...

Please take care and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

I am writing this letter concerning your report on the bombing in the park a month ago.

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OR: I am writing this letter in regards with the bombing that happened in the park a month ago.

Your report insisted my son, Richard, was a suspect for it.

>>You report insisted that my son, Richard, was the suspect fir the said incident.

Due to that, he can not work and even live his normal life, say, he always stays in home like a prisoner.

>>Because of that, he will not be able to work and live a normal life, thus, he always stays home like a prisoner.

Apart from it, we are encompassed by your reporters all the time.

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They only focus on observing and photographing everything related to us.

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Hence, we are now suffering from our privacy invaded by your workers.

>>Hence, we are now suffering from our privacy being invaded by your people.

For instance, we can not look out our window and take a walk with our dogs.

>>For instance, we can not look at our windows or even take our dogs for a walk.

I hope you reconsider and revise your report on my son, and instruct them not to infringe our privacy again.
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Hi. this is [이름].

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The above writing is about the letter to the editor for complaining a false report.

>>The above writing is about a letter to the editor for complaining a false report.

I wish you give me some feedback on how well it follow the form of letter.^^

>>I wish you could give me some feedback on how well it follows the form of a letter.

I hope you begin your day with full of happiness and smile.^^

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