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Hi my friendly Teacher Paula! As I know, tomorrow is Halloween. I am sorry to hear that Power English class won’t be canceled for the festival. It means that you also can’t enjoy your festival to the fullest. However, I still wish you luck and hope you enjoy your festival. See you! ^^ *ESSAY: Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? In my case, I like to do only what I already do well. Actually, I don’t like to take risks. I’ m a little dissatisfied with my personality, and I really want to change it to a bouncy personality. We only live once. There are many exciting and interesting things in this world. Even if we are faced with some risks in our lives, these are worth to try at least once. I want to advise to myself that don’t be afraid of situations which have not happened yet. From now on, I should become a more active and braver person.

Hi my gorgeous Student [이름]! ^.^ Happy Thursday! ^^   You are absolutely right! ^^ Tomorrow really is Halloween. However, just some people celebrate it. I am glad that you know about it. How about there in Korea? Do you enjoy Halloween there?   About your composition, I think you are really fond of making your writings first on the Microsoft Word. I advice you to avoid having that practice. Try to make your compositions directly on your writing page for your homework. It will make you become more flexible in writing.   Anyway, below are the corrections and suggestions for your composition improvement. Enjoy reviewing them! ^^ See you soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Hi my friendly Teacher Paula!>> CORRECT!As I know, tomorrow is Halloween. >> CORRECT! I am sorry to hear that Power English class won’t be canceled for the festival. >> I am sorry to hear that Power English classes won\'t be canceled for the festival. (Be careful on making the shorten forms of modals.) It means that you also can’t enjoy your festival to the fullest. >> It means that you also can\'t enjoy your festival to the fullest. (Modals\' Shorten Form) However, I still wish you luck and hope you enjoy your festival. >> CORRECT! See you! ^^ >> CORRECT! *ESSAY: Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. Which do you prefer? In my case, I like to do only what I already do well. >> CORRECT! Actually, I don’t like to take risks. >> Actually, I don\'t like to take risks. (Modals\' Shorten Form) I’ m a little dissatisfied with my personality, and I really want to change it to a bouncy personality.>> I\'m a little dissatisfied with my personality, and I really want to change it to a bouncy personality. (Modals\' Shorten Form) We only live once. >> CORRECT! There are many exciting and interesting things in this world. >> CORRECT! >> OR: There are many exciting and interesting things in this world we can enjoy. Even if we are faced with some risks in our lives, these are worth to try at least once. >> CORRECT! I want to advise to myself that don’t be afraid of situations which have not happened yet. >> I want to advice to myself, \"Don\'t be afraid of situations which have not happened yet.\" (Make your sentence into a direct speech if you want to use a subject after \"that\".) >> OR: I want to advice to myself that I don\'t have to be afraid of situations which have not happened yet. >> OR: I want to advice to myself that I shouldn\'t be afraid of situations which have not happened yet. From now on, I should become a more active and braver person. >> CORRECT! >> OR: From now on, I should be a more active and braver person.