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2014-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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What is the most attractive personality trait a person can have? Why? I think the most attractive personality trait a person can have is kindness. A kindness person is so attractive because their personality make us comfortable. They give up their priorty to help others. They makes many people happy with their kindness . A kind person usually give their hand first to someone who is having with the situation. They ask something in need, and act friendly to everyone. So for these reason I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for your homework. Have a safe day! ~Kelly^^ What is the most attractive personality trait a person can have? Why?I think the most attractive personality trait a person can have is kindness. >> Correct. A kindness person is so attractive because their personality make us comfortable. >> A kind person is so attractive because his personality makes us feel comfortable. They give up their priorty to help others. >> He gives up his priorty to help others. They makes many people happy with their kindness . >> He makes many people happy with his kindness. A kind person usually give their hand first to someone who is having with the situation. >> A kind person usually gives his hand first to someone who has a problem. They ask something in need, and act friendly to everyone. >> He acts friendly to everyone. So for these reason I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait. >> So for these reasons, I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait a person can have.

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