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What is the most attractive personality trait a person can have? Why?
I think the most attractive personality trait a person can have is kindness. A kindness person is so attractive because their personality make us comfortable. They give up their priorty to help others. They makes many people happy with their kindness . A kind person usually give their hand first to someone who is having with the situation. They ask something in need, and act friendly to everyone. So for these reason I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait.
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What is the most attractive personality trait a person can have? Why?I think the most attractive personality trait a person can have is kindness.
>> Correct.
A kindness person is so attractive because their personality make us comfortable.
>> A kind person is so attractive because his personality makes us feel comfortable.
They give up their priorty to help others.
>> He gives up his priorty to help others.
They makes many people happy with their kindness .
>> He makes many people happy with his kindness.
A kind person usually give their hand first to someone who is having with the situation.
>> A kind person usually gives his hand first to someone who has a problem.
They ask something in need, and act friendly to everyone.
>> He acts friendly to everyone.
So for these reason I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait.
>> So for these reasons, I think kindness is the most attractive personality trait a person can have.
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