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Essay: What are you most thankful for in life? I most thankful for in my life is my family and friends. I love all the people around me, and so thankful to them having great time with me. I was grown up with intimacy family. We did lots of fun activities and also we interdependenced eachother. Whenever I have hard things, they helped me to get through it. I am also thankful to my friends. Without them, my life will be so boring. They always makes me happy. I laugh a lot because of their silly action. I am so happy with my family and friends, and they are most thankful to me.

Hello there! Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the essay. Please review my corrections. ~Kelly^^ Essay: What are you most thankful for in life?I most thankful for in my life is my family and friends. >> In my life, I am most thankful for my family and friends. I love all the people around me, and so thankful to them having great time with me. >> I love all the people around me and I am so thankful to them for having a great time with me. I was grown up with intimacy family. >> I grew up in a an intimate family. We did lots of fun activities and also we interdependenced eachother. >> We did lots of fun activities and we are dependent to one another. Whenever I have hard things, they helped me to get through it. >> When I fave a difficult situation, they help me to get through it. I am also thankful to my friends. Without them, my life will be so boring. >> Correct. They always makes me happy. >> They always make me happy.  I laugh a lot because of their silly action. >> Correct. I am so happy with my family and friends, and they are most thankful to me. >> Correct.