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Essay: What is your greatest fear in life?
My greatest fear in life is my mom.

>> Correct.

She always tease me.

>> She always teases me.

She always makes me clean the house.

>> Correct.

Eventhough I want to have a rest, she doesn\'t accept any excuse.

>> Even though I want to have a rest, she doesn\'t accept any excuse.

Her scold makes me so tired.
>> I feel tired hearing her voice every time that she scolds me.

I can not rest at house with mother.

>> I can not rest at home with my mother.

She also want me to clean the house very neatly.

>> She also wants me to clean the house very neatly.

I thinks it is clean enough, she thinks I need to clean up more. 
>> Even if it is clean, she thinks that I need to clean up more. 

Not only her scold, but also she is so fierce when she is angry.

>> She is so fierce when she is angry.

When I did something wrong, she get angry.

>> When I did something wrong, she gets angry.

It was too fearful to me.

>> I was so afraid.

So, for these reasons I think my momther give me the greatest fear.

>> So, for these reasons I think my momther is my greatest fear.