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2014-10-31 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Do people's personalities change depending on who they're with? Yes, They do. People have their own personalities. There are different kind of personalities. It shows stronger depending on who they are with. Not only person, I guess also situation and where we are.. People who are very nice and kind but if they have difficult situations, they can show the other personalities to protect themselves.. I think most people change their personailities..

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Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! I agree with what you wrote here. There are really some instances that call for us to change our personality. We just have to learn how to deal with things well. Take care! T. JanE ^^ Do people\'s personalities change depending on who they\'re with?>> Correct Yes, they do. >> Correct People have their own personalities.>> Correct There are different kind of personalities.>> There are different kinds of personalities.  It shows stronger depending on who they are with.>> They vary depending on who they are with.  Not only person, I guess also situation and where we are..>> It does not only depend on people, but also on the situation and place.  People who are very nice and kind but if they have difficult situations, they can show the other personalities to protect themselves..>> Even nice and kind people can show a different kind of personality when faced with a difficult situation.  I think most people change their personalities.. >> Correct

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