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Dear my lovely Teacher Paula! Good morning. Today is Friday. I am walking on air now. ^^ By the way, I read my last homework, and I found your advice. I am willing to admit that, and I'd be glad to accept that with pleasure. Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. Lastly, I am also happy to keep studying with you. Happy Halloween! See you! ^.~ *ESSAY: Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? The way I see it, all the successes come from careful plans. Our lives are not that long and that easy. If we try to do something without plans,we might get a bad result. To become a successful person, we not only have to set a careful plan, but it also has to be reconsidered consistently. I believe that we can take another step towards our successes through those processes.

Dear my adorable Student [이름]! ^.^   A scary Friday to you! ^^ Happy Halloween! ^^   Well! You asked me about my Halloween costume before. I just made it this morning. Hahaha! ^^ I hope it is okay.   By the way, it\'s my pleasure to give comments about your writings. I\'m also learning from reading them. I should be the one to say THANK YOU not you. THANK YOU VERY MUCH! I am glad that you continuously make your compositions. Just keep on writing. It will help you improve your other English skills.   Anyway, today, I will give you 8 out of ten. It means you did great on your homework. Keep it up! ^^   That\'s all for now! ^^ See you very soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my lovely Teacher Paula!>> CORRECT! Good morning. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! Today is Friday. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is Friday today. I am walking on air now. ^^ >> CORRECT! By the way, I read my last homework, and I found your advice. >> CORRECT! I am willing to admit that, and I\'d be glad to accept that with pleasure. >> CORRECT! Thank you for pointing out my mistakes. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Thank you for pointing out my mistakes! Lastly, I am also happy to keep studying with you.>> CORRECT! Happy Halloween! >> CORRECT! See you! ^.~>> CORRECT! *ESSAY: Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. In your opinion, what does success come from? The way I see it, all the successes come from careful plans. >> The way I see it, all successes come from careful planning. (When you give a general thought, don\'t use \"the\". \"Careful planning\" means you plan carefully.) Our lives are not that long and that easy.>> CORRECT! If we try to do something without plans,we might get a bad result. >> If we try to do something without plans, we might get a bad result. (There should be a space before \"we\".) To become a successful person, we not only have to set a careful plan, but it also has to be reconsidered consistently. >> To become a successful person, we shouldn\'t only set a plan carefully made, but it also has to be reconsidered consistently. I believe that we can take another step towards our successes through those processes. >> CORRECT!