Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Nina!
How are you today?
It is raining in my city, so it is very cold.
I slept a lot of today morning, so I am full of energy.
I'll go home early today because it's happy Friday.
I don't decide what to do weekend yet.
What do you have plan this weekend?
My homework is as follows.
1. A mechanic fixes cars.
2. The baby cries at night.
3. The sun rises in the east.
4. She eats carrots for breakfast.
5. She always worries about her children.
6. Not many peple retire before they are sixty.
7. The students speak English in the classroom.
8. People in trouble depends a lawyer.
9. Mary enjoys listen to classical music.
10. Chemical energy changes electical energy into batteries.
Thank you for your kindness.
Take care of your health.
Talk to you soon.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!
I am so happy today because it is Halloween. hahahaha.
It\'s nice to hear that you were able to sleep this morning.
I am sure that you will have a good weekend.
Maybe I will visit my grandparents\' tomb on Sunday.
It is because November 1 and 2 are special for Filipinos.This is the time for us to remember our loved ones who passed away and go to church.
Let us talk more about this in class.
Teacher Nina
Hello, Nina!>> correct How are you today?>> correct It is raining in my city, so it is very cold.>> correct
>> OR: The weather is rainy in my city, so it is very cold.I slept a lot of today morning, so I am full of energy.>> I had enough sleep this morning, so I am full of energy.
>> OR: I slept for several hours this morning, so I am full of energy.I\'ll go home early today because it\'s happy Friday.>> correct
>> OR: I\'ll go home early today because it\'s a happy Friday. I don\'t decide what to do weekend yet.
>> I am not yet decided on what to do this weekend.
>> OR: I don\'t have any plans yet for this weekend.What do you have plan this weekend?>> What are your plans for this weekend?
>> OR: What are you going to do this weekend?
My homework is as follows.>> correct 1. A mechanic fixes cars.>> correct 2. The baby cries at night.>> correct 3. The sun rises in the east.>> correct 4. She eats carrots for breakfast.>> correct 5. She always worries about her children.>> correct 6. Not many peple retire before they are sixty.>> correct 7. The students speak English in the classroom.>> correct 8. People in trouble depends a lawyer.>> A lawyer defends people in trouble.9. Mary enjoys listen to classical music.>> Mary enjoys listening to classical music.10. Chemical energy changes electical energy into batteries.>> Batteries change chemical energy into electrical energy.
Thank you for your kindness.>> correct Take care of your health.>> correct Talk to you soon.
>> correct
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