Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Reina!
Did you listen to the song 'Lucky'?
The homework question for today is too hard to answer, so I would like to do the previous homework.
Essay : Do you believe there are ghosts around us?
I don't believe there are ghosts around us.
The reason is because I never see them in a reality and I see them only in movies and TV shows.
And there is no scientific evidence to prove the existence of ghosts.
Besides that, a horror movie about ghosts is the one thing I never want to watch.
Even though I don't believe it, I still can't erase the image from my mind.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
I actually don\'t like horror films these days but when I was in college, I really like it. I can even watch by myself but now I can\'t.
Anyway, they said if you don\'t believe in a thing, it wont come into reality. kkk
So it\'s okay not to believe.^^
Enjoy your weekend !^^
Teacher Reina *.*
Hello, Reina!
Did you listen to the song \'Lucky\'?
>>> correct!^^ Yes I did. You\'re right, the melody is good.
The homework question for today is too hard to answer, so I would like to do the previous homework.
>>> correct!^^
Essay : Do you believe there are ghosts around us?
>>> okay...kkk
I don\'t believe there are ghosts around us.
>>> correct!^^
The reason is because I never see them in a reality and I see them only in movies and TV shows.
>>> The reason is that I never see them in reality and I only see them in movies and TV shows.
And there is no scientific evidence to prove the existence of ghosts.
>>> correct!^^
Besides that, a horror movie about ghosts is the one thing I never want to watch.
>>> correct!^^
Even though I don\'t believe it, I still can\'t erase the image from my mind.
>>> correct!^^
I actually don\'t like horror films these days but when I was in college, I really like it. I can even watch by myself but now I can\'t.
Anyway, they said if you don\'t believe in a thing, it wont come into reality. kkk
So it\'s okay not to believe.^^
Enjoy your weekend !^^
Teacher Reina *.*
Hello, Reina!
Did you listen to the song \'Lucky\'?
>>> correct!^^ Yes I did. You\'re right, the melody is good.
The homework question for today is too hard to answer, so I would like to do the previous homework.
>>> correct!^^
Essay : Do you believe there are ghosts around us?
>>> okay...kkk
I don\'t believe there are ghosts around us.
>>> correct!^^
The reason is because I never see them in a reality and I see them only in movies and TV shows.
>>> The reason is that I never see them in reality and I only see them in movies and TV shows.
And there is no scientific evidence to prove the existence of ghosts.
>>> correct!^^
Besides that, a horror movie about ghosts is the one thing I never want to watch.
>>> correct!^^
Even though I don\'t believe it, I still can\'t erase the image from my mind.
>>> correct!^^
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