homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?
No, it isn't.
Sometimes we do worng things then persuade with others.
There are the things that we do wrongly for the right reason but
I think it is still the wrong thing!
Maybe I could understand the situation or their feelings
however it cannot be acceptable.
Some people said we should be flexible but because of this the rules can be
broken.
Rules are Rules..rules are exited because we should follow them.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Ms. [이름]!
Thank you for your composition! The question I gave you for the homework reminds me of the saying \"The end justifies the means\" by Niccolo Machiavelli. I think that as long as we have good intentions, we must be excused for doing something \'wrong\'. Sometimes, people can\'t get justice by relying on the laws of men alone. Sometimes, we have to do something \'wrong\' to make things right.
T. JanE ^^
Is it right to do the wrong thing for the right reason?>> Correct No, it isn\'t.>> Correct
Sometimes we do worng things then persuade with others.>> Sometimes, we do wrong things and others get persuaded.
There are the things that we do wrongly for the right reason but I think it is still the wrong thing!>> There are things that we do wrongly for the right reason, but I think it\'s still the wrong thing.
Maybe I could understand the situation or their feelings. >> Correct
however it cannot be acceptable.>> However, it is not acceptable.
Some people said we should be flexible but because of this the rules can be broken.>> Correct Rules are Rules..
>> Correct rules are exited because we should follow them.
>> Rules are made and we should follow them.
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