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Hi my nice Teacher Paula! Good morning. How did you like your weekend? Suddenly,my friend who came from Busan called me, and I spent the time with her last Saturday. I was supposed to attend the wedding with my boyfriend, but I chose to meet my friend. Because she doesn't come to Seoul very often, and I also don't go to Busan very often. I think, my boyfriend would feel a little regretful, but then again, he might understand me. The weather in Korea is getting cold, so it is a little hard to do outdoors activities. How is the weather where you are? As I know, the weather in Philippines is moist and hot. I envy of the weather in Philippines right now. ^^; Now I am typing my composition, and my hands are freezing.

Hi my intelligent Student [이름]! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   A wonderful Monday evening to you! ^.^ I was one of the caretakers of our house. My parents were not at home last weekend. Hahaha! ^^ However, my siblings and I had a great time together.   By the way, It is really getting colder even here in the Philippines. Nowadays, I wear thick clothes not to get sick because of the weather. You must take care too! ^^   Anyway, don\'t forget to check you the corrections and suggestions for your composition improvement. See you very soon! ^^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   Hi my nice Teacher Paula!>> CORRECT! Good morning.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Good morning! How did you like your weekend? >> CORRECT! Suddenly,my friend who came from Busan called me, and I spent the time with her last Saturday. >> Suddenly, my friend who\'s from Busan called me, and I spent time with her last Saturday. (There should be a space after comma. Frankly speaking, I\'m not sure about your message.) >> OR: Suddenly, my friend who\'s from Busan called me, and I spent time with her last Saturday in Seoul. >> OR: Suddenly, my friend who came to Seoul from Busan called me, and I spent time with her last Saturday. I was supposed to attend the wedding with my boyfriend, but I chose to meet my friend. >> CORRECT! Because she doesn\'t come to Seoul very often, and I also don\'t go to Busan very often. >> It is because she doesn\'t come to Seoul very often, and I also don\'t go to Busan very often. (Sentences starting with because are not really complete.) I think, my boyfriend would feel a little regretful, but then again, he might understand me. >> CORRECT! The weather in Korea is getting cold, so it is a little hard to do outdoors activities. >> The weather in Korea is getting cold, so it is a little hard to do outdoor activities. (OUTDOOR is an ADJECTIVE, so it\'s not possible to be in plural form.) How is the weather where you are? >> CORRECT! >> OR: How\'s the weather there in the Philippines? As I know, the weather in Philippines is moist and hot. >> CORRECT! I envy of the weather in Philippines right now. ^^;>> I envy of the weather in the Philippines right now. (There should be THE before PHILIPPINES.) Now I am typing my composition, and my hands are freezing. >> Now, I am typing my composition, and my hands are freezing.