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2014-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Using multimedia in classes has several advatageous factors in regard with both teachers and students. At the teachers' perspective, it can help them satisfy the various needs of their students. Also, it can create the learning atmosphere which brings about their more interest in learning. In terms of the students' views, it can adapt to their different learning style more easily because it provides them with a variety of resources for prompting their learning such as presenting visual and audio materials concurrently. Besides, students will be more willing to be involved in their learning processes, in that it stimulates their interest and relates it to what they are going to learn more efficiently.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear [이름]!
Good afternoon and happy Monday!

How are you doing? I hope you had a great time last weekend.

By the way what you did was really great! You were able to share your thoughts about the said topic using excellent vocabulary words. I hope you will keep up the good work my dear.

I will just call you again later my dear [이름]...^^

Take care and have a great day...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Using multimedia in classes has several advatageous factors in regard with both teachers and students.

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word ADVANTAGEOUS)

OR: Using multimedia in classes has several advantages in regard with both teachers and students.

At the teachers\' perspective, it can help them satisfy the various needs of their students.

>>correct

Also, it can create the learning atmosphere which brings about their more interest in learning.

>>correct

In terms of the students\' views, it can adapt to their different learning style more easily because it provides them with a variety of resources for prompting their learning such as presenting visual and audio materials concurrently.

>>correct

Besides, students will be more willing to be involved in their learning processes, in that it stimulates their interest and relates it to what they are going to learn more efficiently.

>>correct

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