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A new day Jessie!
Absolutely I have some difficulties to memorize vocabularies as you said.
Visulaizing? Do you mean to imagine a situation that I'm gonna tell? Um, It's worth trying, I guess. It will be surely helpful to recall vocabularies. Thank you for your advice.
See u on Tuesday!
<Essay>
Under 14 years old, we need to commute their guilt. However in the case of over 13 years old, they have to be treated as a law. If we absolve or commute them, there's huge possibilities that they can commit another crimes.
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Hello there [이름]!
Thanks for always doing your homework.
Well, yup! Thinking of a situation and thinking of the words on how you can tell other people about that situation.^_^
I was a bit confuse with your essay. Most especially with the age. But I think you were just a bit confuse.
Anyway, I hope I got your ideas well.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
But then
A new day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Absolutely I have some difficulties to memorize vocabularies as you said.
>> Absolutely, I have some difficulties memorizing vocabularies as you said.
Visulaizing?
>> Visualizing?
Do you mean to imagine a situation that I\'m gonna tell?
>> Do you mean to imagine a situation that I\'m going to talk about?
Um, It\'s worth trying, I guess.
>> Correct!
It will be surely helpful to recall vocabularies.
>> It will surely be helpful to recall vocabularies.
Thank you for your advice.
>> Correct!
See u on Tuesday!
>> See you on Tuesday!
<Essay>
Under 14 years old, we need to commute their guilt.
>> Under 14 years old, we need to commute their punishment.
However in the case of over 13 years old, they have to be treated as a law.
>> Correct!
OR>> However, in the case of children who are 14 years old and above, they have to treated as what is written in the law.
If we absolve or commute them, there\'s huge possibilities that they can commit another crimes.
>> If we absolve or commute them, there\'s a huge possibility that they will commit other crimes.
Thanks for always doing your homework.
Well, yup! Thinking of a situation and thinking of the words on how you can tell other people about that situation.^_^
I was a bit confuse with your essay. Most especially with the age. But I think you were just a bit confuse.
Anyway, I hope I got your ideas well.
See you tomorrow!
~T. Jessie~
But then
A new day Jessie!
>> Correct!
Absolutely I have some difficulties to memorize vocabularies as you said.
>> Absolutely, I have some difficulties memorizing vocabularies as you said.
Visulaizing?
>> Visualizing?
Do you mean to imagine a situation that I\'m gonna tell?
>> Do you mean to imagine a situation that I\'m going to talk about?
Um, It\'s worth trying, I guess.
>> Correct!
It will be surely helpful to recall vocabularies.
>> It will surely be helpful to recall vocabularies.
Thank you for your advice.
>> Correct!
See u on Tuesday!
>> See you on Tuesday!
<Essay>
Under 14 years old, we need to commute their guilt.
>> Under 14 years old, we need to commute their punishment.
However in the case of over 13 years old, they have to be treated as a law.
>> Correct!
OR>> However, in the case of children who are 14 years old and above, they have to treated as what is written in the law.
If we absolve or commute them, there\'s huge possibilities that they can commit another crimes.
>> If we absolve or commute them, there\'s a huge possibility that they will commit other crimes.
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