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What is your best stress reliever?
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My best stress relievers are my kids, laugh and excercise.
Only looking at my kids relieves my stress.
As you know, laugh makes our body relax and I like to laugh even through small thing.
So I guess I would not get that stressful as usual.
Lastly I usually excercise to sweat. I think this way is the best way to relieve stress. After sweating through excercise, I feel fresh and it seems like all worries and stress disappear.
Hi teacher, a appointment just came up, so I have to postpone our class.
See you in Wed class.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday Mr. [이름]!!
Another week of learning with me! :))
I hope you\'ll enjoy and have fun for a week.
You are improving so never quit on your dreams and just practice. :))
Fighting!
Teacher Myra
My best stress relievers are my kids, laugh and excercise.
>>My best stress relievers are my kids, laughing and exercising.
Only looking at my kids relieves my stress.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Just by looking at my kids relieves my stress.
As you know, laugh makes our body relax and I like to laugh even through small thing.
>>As you know, laughter makes our body relax, and I like to laugh even at small things.
So I guess I would not get that stressful as usual.
>>CORRECT
OR>> That\'s why, I guess I don\'t get stress unlike others.
Lastly I usually excercise to sweat. I think this way is the best way to relieve stress.
>>Lastly, I usually exercise to sweat. I think this way is the best way to relieve stress.
After sweating through excercise, I feel fresh and it seems like all worries and stress disappear.
>>CORRECT but careful with the spelling of exercise.
OR>>Sweating after an exercise makes me feel fresh and it seems like all my worries and stress disappear.
Hi teacher, a appointment just came up, so I have to postpone our class.
>>Hi teacher, an appointment just came up, so I have to postpone our class.
See you in Wed class.
>>CORRECT (yes, see you Mr. [이름], have fun!!! ^^)
Another week of learning with me! :))
I hope you\'ll enjoy and have fun for a week.
You are improving so never quit on your dreams and just practice. :))
Fighting!
Teacher Myra
My best stress relievers are my kids, laugh and excercise.
>>My best stress relievers are my kids, laughing and exercising.
Only looking at my kids relieves my stress.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Just by looking at my kids relieves my stress.
As you know, laugh makes our body relax and I like to laugh even through small thing.
>>As you know, laughter makes our body relax, and I like to laugh even at small things.
So I guess I would not get that stressful as usual.
>>CORRECT
OR>> That\'s why, I guess I don\'t get stress unlike others.
Lastly I usually excercise to sweat. I think this way is the best way to relieve stress.
>>Lastly, I usually exercise to sweat. I think this way is the best way to relieve stress.
After sweating through excercise, I feel fresh and it seems like all worries and stress disappear.
>>CORRECT but careful with the spelling of exercise.
OR>>Sweating after an exercise makes me feel fresh and it seems like all my worries and stress disappear.
Hi teacher, a appointment just came up, so I have to postpone our class.
>>Hi teacher, an appointment just came up, so I have to postpone our class.
See you in Wed class.
>>CORRECT (yes, see you Mr. [이름], have fun!!! ^^)
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