Homework

Hi there my dear [이름]!

Thank you so much for spending time in making this composition...and... you did really great!

Two thumbs up for a job well done...

So please keep up the good work okay?

Have a good night my dear and take care always...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

There are several advantages when prohibiting junk food selling inside and outside of school.

>>correct

Firstly, it can provide the students with more healthy lifestyles.

>>correct

Junk food is convenient to eat and delicious, so many students tend to consume it a lot.

>>correct

However, it can cause some serious health problems such as heart-attack or stroke.

>>correct

Also, it doesn\'t give students well-balanced nutrients, which are necessary for their stable physicality.

>>correct

Secondly, Banning the selling of junk food can be helpful in reduce public and personal medical expenses.

>>Secondly, banning the selling of junk food can be helpful to reduce public and personal medical expenses.

One survey indicated that the dietary habit can greatly impact on humans\' body and bring about spending more unnessary governmental funds for their health.

>>correct (Observe the proper spelling of the word UNNECESSARY)

From that reason, the reduction of taking junk food can guarantee much more its expenses, which can be invested in other fields, for instance, enhancing the quality of education or social security system.

>>correct

OR: From that reason, the reduction of junk food intake can guarantee much more its expenses, which can be invested in other fields, for instance, enhancing the quality of education or social security system.