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I think the people who attracted the dangerous sports are funny challenger. Becuse when they playing the dangerous sports, they can feel the thrill. So they can free for the problem of the life or stress! Many pepole can think that dangerous sports will be able to free for the stress. However they can't try or challenge dangerous sports. The reason is easy. Dangerous sports. They knoe that the sports can hurts, scar them. Therefore I think human who dangerous sports are funny brave challenger.

 Hi there [이름]! ^^ Thank you for answering the composition topic. ^^ It is wonderful to know more about your opinions through it. ^^ Let\'s go to the corrections; First of all, in writing in English, you need to focus on the comprehensibility and coherence of your sentences so your readers can better understand what you are writing about. You did a good job in expressing your thoughts however, there were multiple grammar mistakes that hinder the readability of your essay. Compare and contrast the sentences you wrote against the corrections I have provided for better understanding of the point I am trying to make. ^^ See you in class [이름]. ^^   All good things, ==Teacher Charlie==     I think the people who attracted the dangerous sports are funny challenger. Becuse when they playing the dangerous sports, they can feel the thrill.So they can free for the problem of the life or stress! >> I think the reason why some people are attracted to dangerous sports is because of the thrill and the adrenaline rush that these sports give. They feel that whenever they experience that thrill, they are free of the problems of life or of stress. I also think that these people attracted to dangerous sports are amusing.Many pepole can think that dangerous sports will be able to free for the stress.However they can\'t try or challenge dangerous sports. >> Many people think that participating in dangerous sports is a way of being free of stress however, they won\'t engage in these sports.The reason is easy. Dangerous sports. They knoe that the sports can hurts, scar them. >> The reason is simple. These are dangerous sports. They are aware of the risks in these sports like hurting or scarring themselves.Therefore I think human who dangerous sports are funny brave challenger. >> Therefore, I think people who partake in dangerous sports are brave but ludicrous challengers.