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Hello there
Why do the time pass by faster than I expect? I'm scared of another exams coming. To prepare exams is a heavy burden to me, and I guess, to all of students. :'(
How about you? Do you like to prepare exams?
Then, take care~
<Essay>
The most frightening experience... Can the experience that I droped my cellphone in a toilet and I was frightened to whatever it will work or not be the most frightening experience? haha. Fortunately, it has worked well until now, but there's some performance reduction and it always makes me wanna change for new one. I'll change mine in a winter vacation!
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Hi there!
Thanks for sharing your experience. hahha
It might be frightening to you but I actually laughed when I was reading it. (Sorry.)
But I understand how you felt.
Well, nowadays, I don\' have any examinations to prepare for. So I actually don\'t know how I feel about it.
However, I have made examinations for my students when I taught in a school and I can say that it\'s harder to make an exam than to prepare for it.^_^
Let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there
>> Hello there!
Why do the time pass by faster than I expect?
>> Why does time pass faster that I expected?
I\'m scared of another exams coming.
>> I\'m scared of the coming exam.
To prepare exams is a heavy burden to me, and I guess, to all of students. :\'(
>> To prepare for the exams is a heavy burden to me, and I guess, to all students. :\'(
How about you?
>> Correct!
Do you like to prepare exams?
>> Do you like preparing for exams?
Then, take care~
>> Correct!
<Essay>
The most frightening experience...
>> Correct!
Can the experience that I droped my cellphone in a toilet and I was frightened to whatever it will work or not be the most frightening experience? haha.
>> Can the experience that I dropped my cellphone in a toilet and I was frightened if it will work or not be the most frightening experience? haha.
Fortunately, it has worked well until now, but there\'s some performance reduction and it always makes me wanna change for new one.
>> Fortunately, it has been working well until now, but there\'s a performance reduction and it always makes me wanna change for a new one.
I\'ll change mine in a winter vacation!
>> I\'ll change mine on winter vacation!
Thanks for sharing your experience. hahha
It might be frightening to you but I actually laughed when I was reading it. (Sorry.)
But I understand how you felt.
Well, nowadays, I don\' have any examinations to prepare for. So I actually don\'t know how I feel about it.
However, I have made examinations for my students when I taught in a school and I can say that it\'s harder to make an exam than to prepare for it.^_^
Let\'s enjoy this day!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there
>> Hello there!
Why do the time pass by faster than I expect?
>> Why does time pass faster that I expected?
I\'m scared of another exams coming.
>> I\'m scared of the coming exam.
To prepare exams is a heavy burden to me, and I guess, to all of students. :\'(
>> To prepare for the exams is a heavy burden to me, and I guess, to all students. :\'(
How about you?
>> Correct!
Do you like to prepare exams?
>> Do you like preparing for exams?
Then, take care~
>> Correct!
<Essay>
The most frightening experience...
>> Correct!
Can the experience that I droped my cellphone in a toilet and I was frightened to whatever it will work or not be the most frightening experience? haha.
>> Can the experience that I dropped my cellphone in a toilet and I was frightened if it will work or not be the most frightening experience? haha.
Fortunately, it has worked well until now, but there\'s some performance reduction and it always makes me wanna change for new one.
>> Fortunately, it has been working well until now, but there\'s a performance reduction and it always makes me wanna change for a new one.
I\'ll change mine in a winter vacation!
>> I\'ll change mine on winter vacation!
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