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2014-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. I'm taking a Japanese course at the moment. I'm going to have fish for my main course. 2. He wrote her a note before he left. She found the top note difficult to sing. 3. It's hot so let's sit in the shade. That shade of red doesn't suit her. 4. She packed a trunk for the ocean voyage. We sat on a fallen tree trunk to rest. 5. He gave her a beautiful diamond ring for her birthday. Ring me later. I'll be home in an hour. 6. The stars look bright tonight. Lots of movie stars live in Hollywood. 7. He sat on the river bank to fish. I must go to the bank to get some cash. 8. The new head of the department is a woman. He's got a smart head on his shoulders.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Ms. [이름]! Thank you for your composition today! You are very consistent with your performance in class. Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ 1. I\'m taking a Japanese course at the moment.I\'m going to have fish for my main course.>> Correct 2. He wrote her a note before he left.She found the top note difficult to sing.>> Correct 3. It\'s hot so let\'s sit in the shade.That shade of red doesn\'t suit her.>> Correct 4. She packed a trunk for the ocean voyage.We sat on a fallen tree trunk to rest.>> Correct 5. He gave her a beautiful diamond ring for her birthday.Ring me later. I\'ll be home in an hour.>> Correct 6. The stars look bright tonight.Lots of movie stars live in Hollywood.>> Correct 7. He sat on the river bank to fish.I must go to the bank to get some cash.>> Correct 8. The new head of the department is a woman.He\'s got a smart head on his shoulders. >> Correct  

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