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2014-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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Hello there~ Yes, I know there's some errors but I do know about most all errors that I commit. It is just quiet hard for me to think of all things in a short time. Of course some errors that I make are what I don't know, so I reallly appreciate your advice about those. Thank you! :) I never feel bad when you give me a piece of advice. Don't worry. :D See u soon! <Essay> The oily foods! As I said to you about it, there's a lot of greasy foods. I absolutely realized why tea is really important for chineses. I don't want to eat them again. :(

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HI there [이름]!
I\'m happy to hear that you don\'t feel bad when I\'m correcting you.
Well, I think you really know your errors because you ask about them at times.
I know that you will be better as long as you keep on applying what you know.
Because actually, you know a lot of grammar rules but then the challenge is for you to apply it while speaking.
I know that you are doing your best and I\'m so happy because of that.
Keep it up!
~T. Jessie~
Hello there~
>> Correct!
Yes, I know there\'s some errors but I do know about most all errors that I commit.

>> Yes, I know that there are some errors but I do know about almost all errors that I commit.
It is just quiet hard for me to think of all things in a short time.

>> Correct!
Of course some errors that I make are what I don\'t know, so I reallly appreciate your advice about those.

>> Of course some errors that I make are what I don\'t know, so I really appreciate your advice about those.
Thank you! :)

>> Correct!
I never feel bad when you give me a piece of advice.

>> Correct!
Don\'t worry. :D

>> Correct!
See u soon!

>> Correct!
<Essay>
The oily foods!

>> Correct!
As I said to you about it, there\'s a lot of greasy foods.

>> As I told you about it, there are a lot of greasy foods.
I absolutely realized why tea is really important for chineses.

>> I absolutely realized why tea is really important for Chinese.
I don\'t want to eat them again. :(

>> Correct!

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