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2014-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Hello,Nina! How are you today? I went on a business trip on behalf of my collegue. I am working at previous branch. as you know I go home early today^^ I will take a vacation tomorrow. My youngest son will be taken photo by photographer tomorrow. Because Korean people celebrate 100days,200days and 1 year and take a picture. So, we will go to baby photo studio, If I have an opportunity, I'll send our family photo to you. Thank you for your teaching. Talk to you soon.

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Hi there [이름]! Happy fourth day of the week.Thanks for always doing your essays and homework. I really love it. I feel great whenever I receive a composition from you.Really? Oh my god! I am excited to see your pictures. Hihihihi.I think you can send it through Kakao Talk. You can send it there, it is posted on our home page. I hope that you will have a great long weeekend, okay? Talk to you very soon. Teacher Nina   Hello,Nina!>> correct How are you today?>> correct I went on a business trip on behalf of my collegue.>> correct I am working at previous branch. as you know I go home early today^^>> I am working in the city where my previous branch is located. As you know, I wil go home early today. I will take a vacation tomorrow.>> correct My youngest son will be taken photo by photographer tomorrow.>> My youngest son will be taken photos by a photographer tomorrow. >> OR: A photographer will take some photos of my youngest son tomorrow. Because Korean people celebrate 100days,200days and 1 year and take a picture.>> Because Korean people celebrate their 100th day, 200th day and one year after they were born and take a picture. So, we will go to baby photo studio, If I have an opportunity, I\'ll send our family photo to you.>> So, we will go to a baby photo studio. If I will have an opportunity, I will send you our family picture.>> OR: So, we will go to a photo studio. If I will be given the chance, I will send you our family picture. Thank you for your teaching.>> Thank you for your teachings.>> OR: Thank you for teaching me.   Talk to you soon. >> correct

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