HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
What should a foreigner avoid when they go to Korea? Give me three things and why
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Actually, the things for a foreigner to avoid didn't flash into my mind.
Because most Korean people are very friendly to a foreigner and there is no any limit or special regulation.
Instead, I recommend a foreigner to empty below three things when they come to Korea.
First, empty your stomach before visiting Korea because there are various delicious dishes and street foods.
Second, empty your bag and bring the biggest bag you have because you can buy cheap and high quality products here.
Three, empty your brain because your brain can be fullfiled with new happy memories and experiences.
Hi, teacher!
As I told you in last class, I will go workshop tomorrow, so I have to postpone our class. See you next Monday! Have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi Mr. [이름]! :))
Another day is about to pass by.
Hope all is well with you and your family! :))
I understand that you have to postpone the class Mr. [이름].
It\'s okay, so no worries! Have fun there and tell me your stories next week! :)
One more thing, I really love your answer in this homework! Haha!
How did you come up with that?! :D
Because of that, I really wanna go to Korea soon! kkk~~
You are very witty. :))
Take care and catch you later in class! :))
===Teacher Myra===
What should a foreigner avoid when they go to Korea? Give me three things and why
Actually, the things for a foreigner to avoid didn\'t flash into my mind.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Actually, I haven\'t thought about the things that a foreigner should avoid here in Korea.
Because most Korean people are very friendly to a foreigner and there is no any limit or special regulation.
>>Most Korean people are very friendly to a foreigner and there is no limit or special regulation.
Instead, I recommend a foreigner to empty below three things when they come to Korea.
>>Instead, I recommend a foreigner to empty the three things below when they come to Korea.
First, empty your stomach before visiting Korea because there are various delicious dishes and street foods.
>>CORRECT
OR>> First, have your stomach empty before going here because there are various foods to try.
Second, empty your bag and bring the biggest bag you have because you can buy cheap and high quality products here.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Second, empty your bag because it will be filled with cheap and high quality products here.
Three, empty your brain because your brain can be fullfiled with new happy memories and experiences.
>>CORRECT but be careful with the spelling of fulfilled.
Hi teacher!
As I told you in last class, I will go workshop tomorrow, so I have to postpone our class. See you next Monday! Have a great weekend!
>>As I told you in our last class, I will go to a workshop tomorrow, so I have to postpone our class. See you next Monday! Have a great weekend!
Another day is about to pass by.
Hope all is well with you and your family! :))
I understand that you have to postpone the class Mr. [이름].
It\'s okay, so no worries! Have fun there and tell me your stories next week! :)
One more thing, I really love your answer in this homework! Haha!
How did you come up with that?! :D
Because of that, I really wanna go to Korea soon! kkk~~
You are very witty. :))
Take care and catch you later in class! :))
===Teacher Myra===
What should a foreigner avoid when they go to Korea? Give me three things and why
Actually, the things for a foreigner to avoid didn\'t flash into my mind.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Actually, I haven\'t thought about the things that a foreigner should avoid here in Korea.
Because most Korean people are very friendly to a foreigner and there is no any limit or special regulation.
>>Most Korean people are very friendly to a foreigner and there is no limit or special regulation.
Instead, I recommend a foreigner to empty below three things when they come to Korea.
>>Instead, I recommend a foreigner to empty the three things below when they come to Korea.
First, empty your stomach before visiting Korea because there are various delicious dishes and street foods.
>>CORRECT
OR>> First, have your stomach empty before going here because there are various foods to try.
Second, empty your bag and bring the biggest bag you have because you can buy cheap and high quality products here.
>>CORRECT
OR>> Second, empty your bag because it will be filled with cheap and high quality products here.
Three, empty your brain because your brain can be fullfiled with new happy memories and experiences.
>>CORRECT but be careful with the spelling of fulfilled.
Hi teacher!
As I told you in last class, I will go workshop tomorrow, so I have to postpone our class. See you next Monday! Have a great weekend!
>>As I told you in our last class, I will go to a workshop tomorrow, so I have to postpone our class. See you next Monday! Have a great weekend!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.