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학생이 쓴 원문
For another weekend, Jessie!
This weekend is already almost close to us. Since I became a university student, I often feel that the time is quiet beeing gone fast. How about you? Do you also feel like that? :)
Thx u for ur advice and c u on Friday. XD
<Essay>
If I am, I wanna make a holiday for Sun-Sin Yi, the most respectable hero in Korea. He saved our country by defending against Japan during the Japanese Invasion of Korea in 1592. If he wasn't, we might be speaking in Japanese not Korean. I don't even wanna imagine that, now I want to learn Japanese though...
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I actually think the same way as you do.
Time really pass so fast.
Anyway, let\'s just be grateful that it\'s already weekend.
And let\'s enjoy every minute that we have cause we cannot stop time.
Have a blissful Friday!
~T. Jessie~
For another weekend, Jessie!
>> Correct!
This weekend is already almost close to us.
>> Correct!
Since I became a university student, I often feel that the time is quiet beeing gone fast.
>> Since I became a university student, I often feel that the time passes quite fast.
How about you?
>> Correct!
Do you also feel like that? :)
>> Correct!
Thx u for ur advice and c u on Friday. XD
>> Thanks for your advice and see you on Friday.
<Essay>
If I am, I wanna make a holiday for Sun-Sin Yi, the most respectable hero in Korea.
>> Correct! (informal)
>> If I am, I want to make a holiday for Sun-Sin Yi, the most respectable hero in Korea.
He saved our country by defending against Japan during the Japanese Invasion of Korea in 1592.
>> He saved our country by defending it against Japan during the Japanese invasion in Korea in 1592.
If he wasn\'t, we might be speaking in Japanese not Korean.
>> If he didn\'t, we might be speaking in Japanese now and not Korean.
I don\'t even wanna imagine that, now I want to learn Japanese though...
>> I don\'t even wanna imagine that, though I want to learn Japanese nowadays.
>> I don\'t even want to imagine that, though I want to learn Japanese nowadays.
I actually think the same way as you do.
Time really pass so fast.
Anyway, let\'s just be grateful that it\'s already weekend.
And let\'s enjoy every minute that we have cause we cannot stop time.
Have a blissful Friday!
~T. Jessie~
For another weekend, Jessie!
>> Correct!
This weekend is already almost close to us.
>> Correct!
Since I became a university student, I often feel that the time is quiet beeing gone fast.
>> Since I became a university student, I often feel that the time passes quite fast.
How about you?
>> Correct!
Do you also feel like that? :)
>> Correct!
Thx u for ur advice and c u on Friday. XD
>> Thanks for your advice and see you on Friday.
<Essay>
If I am, I wanna make a holiday for Sun-Sin Yi, the most respectable hero in Korea.
>> Correct! (informal)
>> If I am, I want to make a holiday for Sun-Sin Yi, the most respectable hero in Korea.
He saved our country by defending against Japan during the Japanese Invasion of Korea in 1592.
>> He saved our country by defending it against Japan during the Japanese invasion in Korea in 1592.
If he wasn\'t, we might be speaking in Japanese not Korean.
>> If he didn\'t, we might be speaking in Japanese now and not Korean.
I don\'t even wanna imagine that, now I want to learn Japanese though...
>> I don\'t even wanna imagine that, though I want to learn Japanese nowadays.
>> I don\'t even want to imagine that, though I want to learn Japanese nowadays.
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