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I was a little bit tried but I was a good Here is my homework. ^^ I have lived since 2002 in my hometown called Gyeonggi-do Anjung-eup. My hometown is country. so there isn't big department store. I want to bulit a big department store in my hometown. I won't go a downtown called Pyeongtaek city when I need to buy new clothes and new shoes. If my hometown would built a big department store, my hometown would be developing.

Hi [이름]!Thank you for making your homework. I understand that it is really hard to be far away from the city becauseif you need something then you have to ride for a long time before getting in the city.Anyway [이름], please study the following corrections below, okay.Take care always! ^^See you! ^^~~Teacher KrisI was a little bit tried but I was a good>>I was trying but I was good.I have lived since 2002 in my hometown called Gyeonggi-do Anjung-eup.>> CorrectMy hometown is country.>> My hometown is like a country side.so there isn\'t big department store.>> So, there isn\'t big department store.I want to bulit a big department store in my hometown.>> I want that a big department store will be built in my hometown.I won\'t go a downtown called Pyeongtaek city when I need to buy new clothes and new shoes.>> I won\'t go downtown which is called  Pyeongtaek city when I need to buy new things.If my hometown would built a big department store, my hometown would be developing.>> If my hometown would build a big department store, my hometown would be developing.