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2014-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you were a color, what would you be? Why? If I were a color, I would be a white. The color of white has own color but it is not so obious. When it mixes with other colors, it will show its color and it will make other colors soft and warm. I wat to be like this kind of person. I am special but I know how to coperate with others. that is why I would choose the color of white. Hi!there! Thanks for being my tutor*^^* I would like to ask your favor. Every Mon, tues, wednesday, Teacher gave me some questions as my homework like fill in the blanks, choosing the words, complete the sentences and so on. Every Thursday and Friday, It was essay..If you are okay with these, I would like to have homework like this..Please thinkabout this and tell me.. Thanks!

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Ms. [이름]!

Thanks for taking some time to answer your composition.
And thank you also for telling me about your concern.

And don\'t worry because we can do what you want.

Just for you. ^^

Anyway, I hope you will have a good weekend.
Take care!


Always,
T. Kathrine ^^


If you were a color, what would you be? Why?
If I were a color, I would be a white.

>> If I were a color, I would be white.
 The color of white has own color but it is not so obious.

>> Color white has its own color but it is not obvious.
 When it mixes with other colors, it will show its color and it will make other colors
soft and warm.

>> When it is mixed with other colors, it will show its color and it will make the other colors soft and warm.

I wat to be like this kind of person.

>> I want to be like this kind of person.

I am special but I know how to coperate with others.

>> correct! (cooperate)

that is why I would choose the color of white.
>> That is why I chose color white.
Hi!there!

>> Hi there!
 Thanks for being my tutor*^^*

>> correct!
 I would like to ask your favor.

>> correct!

>> or: I would like to ask you a favor.
 Every Mon, tues, wednesday, Teacher gave me some questions as my homework like fill in the blanks, choosing the words, complete the sentences and so on.

>> Every Mon, Tues, and Wednesday, my former eacher gave me some questions as my homework like fill in the blanks, choosing the words, complete the sentences and so on.
 Every Thursday and Friday, It was essay..

>> And every Thursday and Friday, it was an essay.

If you are okay with these, I would like to have homework like this..

>>  correct!

>> or: if it is okay with you, I would like to have this kind of homework.

Please thinkabout this and tell me..

>>  correct!
 Thanks!

 >> correct!

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