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2014-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Hi Erine. I am happy that you are getting better. I have questions arising from your comments. 8.Why did this company mentioned that white skin color is good? -->Can I use infinitive verb? "mentioned" -->"mention" 10.Some of the artificial products put on our face and body are getting worse. --> I feel strange of using "put". "putting" might be more correct. ------------------------------------------------- Genetically modifying foods already spread our daily life. I think that those kinds of crops don't have any problem. Globally, Exhaustion of food is getting serious. Cultivated land is shorten, required food is rising. But we don't find any other alternative. We know that it's not good for our health. But we can't stop eating the genetically modifying food. We might die for starving without that. We have to study consistently both side. One is to solve the shortage of food. The other is genetically modifying food.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름].^^

First, I would like to extend my appreciation for doing your homework again! You never fail to do it.^^

You are very industrious despite your busy schedule.

Second, I want to apologize for some mistakes that I had in my comments, which you correct on your own.

1. Why did this company mentioned that white skin color is good?

It should only be \"mention\" and we should always use the base form of the verb when we use \"do, does and did\" in our sentences

or questions.

2. Some of the artificial products put on our face and body are getting worse.

The phrase \"we put on our face and body\" is an adjective clause however, I wasn\'t able to type \"we\".

The sentence should be \"Some of the artificial products we put on our face and body are getting worse.\"

The complete sentence is:

\"Some of the artificial products that we put on our face and body are getting worse.\"

Is it clear now? I promise I will check the comments carefully so that you won\'t have any confusions anymore.

See you tomorrow!^^
~~Teacher Erine~~
Hi Erine.

>>Correct.
I am happy that you are getting better.

>> Correct.

I have questions arising from your comments.

>>>>
8.Why did this company mentioned that white skin color is good?
-->Can I use infinitive verb? \"mentioned\" -\"mention\"

>>Correct.

10.Some of the artificial products put on our face and body are getting worse.
I feel strange of using \"put\". \"putting\" might be more correct.

>> Correct.

-------------------------------------------------
Genetically modifying foods already spread our daily life.

>> Genetically modifying foods already spread in the life of the humans.
I think that those kinds of crops don\'t have any problem.

>> Correct.
Globally, Exhaustion of food is getting serious.

>> Globally, exhaustion of food is getting serious.
Cultivated land is shorten, required food is rising.

>> The cultivated lands became smaller however, the requirement of food is rising.
But we don\'t find any other alternative.

>> But we can\'t find any other alternatives.
We know that it\'s not good for our health.

>> Correct.
But we can\'t stop eating the genetically modifying food.

>> But we can\'t stop eating the genetically modified food.
We might die for starving without that.

>> We might die of starving without it.

We have to study consistently both side.

>> We have to consistently study both sides.

One is to solve the shortage of food.

>> Correct.

The other is genetically modifying food

>> The other is to genetically modify food.

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