Homework

Hey there~~ Are you spending a good weekend? In my case, I'm fine. If you have something special, let's talk about that. Thank you for noticing mistakes that I committed, but it seem that you sometimes mishear my speakings. I know this is a matter of my pronounciation maybe, however it often comfuse me. So what I wanna tell you is that please notice me when you're not able to understand or hear properly what I say. It will help me find out my mistakes more effectively. Be safe! <Essay> First, I wish to be a solider for a long time as my dream. Second, I wanna bring my 'a' game in a battle field as an officer. The last, I hope to get enough money to play console and PC games! If I could choose only one, my choice is the first one. Because the rest will follow naturally after I become a soldier.

Hi there!
Thanks for the suggestion. I will do that. ^_^
And I do hope that you dream will come true.
I think you are the only person who can make it come true.
So just do your best and like you\'ve said, the rest will follow.
Have an enjoyable Monday!
~T. Jessie~
Hey there~~
>> Correct!
>> Hey there!
Are you spending a good weekend?
>> Correct!
OR>> Are you having a good weekend?
In my case, I\'m fine.
>> Correct!
If you have something special, let\'s talk about that.
>> Correct!
Thank you for noticing mistakes that I committed, but it seem that you sometimes mishear my speakings.
>> Thank you for noticing the mistakes that I committed, but it seems that you sometimes mishear my speech.
I know this is a matter of my pronounciation maybe, however it often comfuse me.
>> I know that this is a matter of my pronunciation maybe, however it often confuses me.
So what I wanna tell you is that please notice me when you\'re not able to understand or hear properly what I say.
>> So what I want to tell you is to please notice me when you\'re not able to understand or hear me properly.
It will help me find out my mistakes more effectively.
>> Correct!
Be safe!
>> Correct!
<Essay>
First, I wish to be a solider for a long time as my dream.
>> First, I wish to be a soldier for a long time just like my dream.
Second, I wanna bring my \'a\' game in a battle field as an officer.
>> Correct!
The last, I hope to get enough money to play console and PC games!
>> Correct!
If I could choose only one, my choice is the first one.
>> Correct!
Because the rest will follow naturally after I become a soldier.
>> Correct!